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for A Modern Courtship

by crunchysalad

schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I find this story interesting. The premise of the arrancar and it devours humans and hallows alike while their bodies are sleeping is facinating. I have not read anything remotetly similar to this storyline and believe me I have read various Byakuya and Renji stories.

Good Job! Keep up the good work. I will wait patiently for more.
DP01
person qwerty
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just when they were exchanging personal stories.. BAM! Back to professionalism. le sigh
Great chapter!!
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Gosh... *¬* our dear Byakuya saw the road to heaven hahahahahaha nosebleed, nosebleed!! Renji is so adorable and sexy! Poor Renji, he didn't deserve to be treated like that, I think he is already very attracted to his lovely Taicho. I don't know who is going to snap first, Byakuya is a control freak but he is getting closer to his limit, sweet Renji is going to be in hell when he finally realize he is falling for Byakuya and he is so honest that he is not going to be able to stay calm about that, can't wait for next chapter! Thank you so much for sharing!!! =)
person satterb
schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I was startled when Byakuya suddenly became angry with Renji. Poor Renji! This fic is very, very good. I don't believe you were being overly descriptive in this chapter. This story is very well put together, and the characters are believable. Both Renji and Byakuya are very complex people, so they should have some deep emotions. I can't wait for more. Thanks for all your hard work. Best of all, this story has a very captivating plot, but when you can finally get down to anything hot and heavy, none of us will be dissapointed. TEEHEE!
person Shere
schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
After checking this story everyday, I see you have reviewed! I actually screamed with excitement xD This chappie did not disappoint me in the slightest, not counting the fact that it ENDED, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Byakuya had better not push Renji away from him! I hope Renji's realization is something good xD Please updat soon! PleasepleasepleasepleasepleasePuh-LEEEEE-eeeeeeez!
person chiron11
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is an engaging fic. Your diction and cadence are artful and consistent, making it a very readable piece. Good storytelling. I want more!
schedule December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is so amazing. There are some parts where i feel there's too much detail but i love it all the same. It's so hard to find good fan-fictions, ones that keep the people in character. Keep up the good work, waiting for an update.
person xpinkcloudx
schedule December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Renji grinned as he cupped his gigai's impressive bulge. There was a cocky tilt to his chin as he turned towards Akon. "I see you got the size right."

lol..sounds like something Renji would say. Byakuya..so cute..trying to be interested in something else..but at Renji's gigai..particularly the nether region. Renji and Byakuya in Karakuratown... I always wanted a fic where they both end up there together. So many possibilities. Both of them in civilian clothing..in a more casual atmosphere..yeah can't wait. I enjoyed this chapter a lot and don't worry you're too good a writer to disappoint anyone. I'll keep reading this for sure.
person Iyasu
schedule December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the way that this is going. It's well-written, and flows wonderfully, not to mention that I love the way you're drawing from canon. I can't wait to read more of this and your other work.
person Shere
schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is the best RenjixByakuya fanfic I've come across so far :D You're doing an extroadinary job! Please update as soon as possible. I beeeeeg of you!