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for A Modern Courtship

by crunchysalad

schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Hope you keep writing it because I am dying to read more, I like when the story has a slow pace, it feels more real, I don't believe in love at first sight, I believe that love is and must be something you build with time. Byakuya and Renji are very different so if is going to exist a relationship between them, they will need to find a balance between their personalities, if they are able to find that balance they will be a great couple because they will give each other what they have been needing for a very long time, well, just my humble opinion xP
person satterb
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I read all your fics! I love this one. I think it's a great story. I laughed out loud when Renji grabbed the crotch of his gigai, and then even harder when Byakuya had to admonish him! I look forward to more of this and all your other stories. Thanks for all your hard work.
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far. Byakuya drinking was great :) he needs to loosen up a bit :P and the conversation between him and Renji and how he prefers the company of men made me giggle XD. I really like this pairing and I can't wait to see where you take this! :D
person xpinkcloudx
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really love your story so far. My favorite part has to be where Byakuya catches Rukia and Renji having a private moment. I actually said "awesome" out loud when I read the part about Renji admitting that he liked men. I couldn't contain my excitement I knew Bya-kun would be surprised. I love your Byakuya here. He's crushing hard like a school girl but it's sweet but still IC. I don't blame him though Renji is just very attractive in a lot of ways. He looks rough but inside he's so much more. I can't wait to read your future chapters.

I was wondering if you had a fanfiction.net account also as I go that site often but here is nice too. This fic is already a fave in my top fave ByaRen stories! I'll be copying and pasting it to my notepad documents on my pc so I can read it again without going online!

xpinkcloux
person satterb
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is "WOW"! This is your best work yet! I'm really impressed. I love this story, and I love this pairing. Some may think they've been done to death, but as opposites in the most extreme, they fit together perfectly. You've got them both nailed! I can't wait to see more of this. Thanks for all your hard work!
person Vidori
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done, well-written.

I've fav'd it. I'm interested in seeing how this goes.

~Val
schedule November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
^.^ can't wait for more.
-Hoshi