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for The Beautiful Way

by crunchysalad

person Nivell
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Could that little silver fox be Byakuya's guardian? Lol, although Byakuya is fucked in so many ways in this chapter. First, can I say that I love an uke Byakuya who knows what he wants and takes it. So fucking sexy. Second, I felt bad for Byakuya's old master since he really seemed like a nice guy....and oh man, did he lose face in front of everybody! Third, the RenBya scenes were hot and I am so sad they couldn't at least see each other before Byakuya went into exiled. I have a feeling we shall be seeing Kenpachi in the next chapters...can you extend the story so that we could get some more KenBya scenes in this? Lol, or write more of this pairing in your other fics. It's driving me crazy with lust!
person Katastrifi
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
D:
I felt so bad for poor Marechiyo! But, at the same time,
I was saying "go away, I want more Zaraki!!"
(x
I never pictured Renji as a priest, but it really worked out.
I'm ecstatic that's he's still in character, and yet so different
at the same time. Good job. (:
I am absolutely hoping that Zaraki will come back to life,
whether it be as a zombie or whatever. Hahah.

Can't wait for more!!
Xx.
person Nivell
schedule December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh nooooooo, Zaraki can't be dead!! Stupid rapist Oni! (though that scene where Byakuya is getting ass-raped by the oni's tongue was hot as fuck!!) Please continue!!
schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A smut fic where Byakuya isnt too OOC XD Well done!
person YACUMO
schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW....
Really....wow..... I am speechless and reviewless.
This is by far one of the most well made Bleach fics...ever!!
I loved the description and detailed beauty you worked with in this fic.
Lovely... I hope to read from you really really soon.

Ps. Would be lovely for Uryuu to be the next wakashi.
person satterb
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I didn't realize I hadn't left a review for this story. I was excited to see an update, but unless you've made changes, I didn't see another chapter. ?? Anyway. I just wanted to let you know that I love this sweet and sexy story. I'm a sucker for Kenpachi. Your pairing is really hot. Kenpachi's gruff and agressive nature to Byakuya's uptight and proper. Makes great fireworks! I look forward to more of this story...thanks for working your a*s off!
person qwerty
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Part I was so sad!! Please continue!
person xpinkcloudx
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm excited to read part two with Renji!
person Katastrifi
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is so beautifully written, I almost cried
when I reached the end of the page. (x
I can't wait for more.
Xx.
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I usually dislike uke Byakuya - simply because the authors make him into a whiney little uke who has no backbone.
But your Byakuya is amazingly well done and the plot is just... it's something else and so thrilling.
At the end I was really gaping at the screen and fought back tears, and mind you - I usually am not over emotional. This was heart wrenching.

You are amazing. Thank you so very much.