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for Salvation

by Mirrors1984

person Anon
schedule December 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far. Damn Ogichi but then again Hollows can't keep secrets can they?
schedule December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey M, I'm really sorry I didn't review the last chapter. Been busy and I must've missed that update. On the plus side, I did get to read two great chapters back to back. Honestly, I never thought the Soul Society would come after them in full force like this, but its an excellent way to have the events that took place in "Reflection" still have meaning. Can't wait to see what happens next!
person vic
schedule November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You need to do more lemons, they are hot!
person jb
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
keep it up
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Ichigo's really starting to see the light at the end of the tunnel now.
person johnny redgrave
schedule October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
glad to see you back at this one. keep it up
schedule October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You're back....

My jaw literally dropped in shock. I was about to go to bed but I just had to read this chapter. I think you did a great job(as usual) and it was a really good return to form. If Ishida really is doing Yuzu, not only is that a really bold move on your part, but also makes that particular storyline about 500 times more interesting. I like how you're depicting Ichigo and Tatsuki's relationship as becoming both old and new again. Her getting pregnant is a GREAT idea, that'll really gum up the works. The choice of abortion will definitely come up somewhere down the line here,and I think when or if Ichigo and Tatsuki have that talk, it'll force them to push thier feelings forward. Really glad to have you back and can't wait til see where this is headed next.

Also, no matter how much of a hiatus you take, you always have at least one fan who'll always be ready to read you write.
schedule October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. This is good.

I "suspect" I just read this thing straight through and postponed work.

ARGH, so well-developed! (I will be back for more.)
person gollumsfriend
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM


Absolutely WONDERFUL to see you update this story, thank you so much!

Have to admit that after the first time they had sex, I figured it would lead to a pregnancy for her. Don't get me wrong, I have no problems with that at all---I just hope there's not 10 chapters of horrible angst before she tells Ichigo. ><

Great job and please return for another update soon!
person JoshB
schedule September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like the story so far. But something that through me for a loop was Ogichi use Ichigo to be with Orihime. How did that happen and why does Ichigo make everyone seem like he was the bad guy when he should of been open with friends but he closed himself off and what is the connection Ichigo and Tatsuki have