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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I'm so happy everything turned out well in the end. I hated that two of my favorite characters had to die in Bleach. That was a beautiful story, thank you.^^
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I actually liked this (and I'm allergic to sweetness). I won't tell you about the spanish thing (spanish is my first language) since one of your reviewers had already pointed it out. But I liked how Ran and Hime shared their feelings with each other to later get a big surprise the next morning. (and I also liked the imagery of a chibi-ulqui. I have a thing for kids in fics. They are just so cute you want to smother them in hugs! Okay, I'll shut up now! LOL!)
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! =) I usually don't like stories to be so sweet but this one is nice =) You did a great job! Wan't some help with Spanish?
(2)I love you, I give you my heart - Te amo (or you can use Te quiero but "Te amo" means stronger feelings), te doy mi corazón -(4)You are mine, my princess, mine and no one else's - Eres mía, mi princesa, mía y de ningún otro (mío is for male gender) - (5)I belong to you and only you - Pertenezco a usted y solo usted or you can use "pertenezco a ti y solo a ti" "usted" is more used when you are talking to someone with more respect or someone you don't know. (6) Love of my soul, my sun princess, let your heart go on - Amor de mi alma (don't need so much "el" here), mi princesa de sol, deja que tu corazón siga (7)My heart will go on, my love, my moon prince - mi corazón seguirá, mi amor, mi príncipe de Luna. Hope it helps and I would really like to see more fics from you. Take care. XoXo.
(2)I love you, I give you my heart - Te amo (or you can use Te quiero but "Te amo" means stronger feelings), te doy mi corazón -(4)You are mine, my princess, mine and no one else's - Eres mía, mi princesa, mía y de ningún otro (mío is for male gender) - (5)I belong to you and only you - Pertenezco a usted y solo usted or you can use "pertenezco a ti y solo a ti" "usted" is more used when you are talking to someone with more respect or someone you don't know. (6) Love of my soul, my sun princess, let your heart go on - Amor de mi alma (don't need so much "el" here), mi princesa de sol, deja que tu corazón siga (7)My heart will go on, my love, my moon prince - mi corazón seguirá, mi amor, mi príncipe de Luna. Hope it helps and I would really like to see more fics from you. Take care. XoXo.