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February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I loved it!
I'm really excited to see what happens.
Hopefully Gin didn't do anything with that other woman and I was really glad that Rangiku didn't sleep with the man she had just met. I love Gin and Rangiku as a couple. They really make a great pair.
I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!
I'm really excited to see what happens.
Hopefully Gin didn't do anything with that other woman and I was really glad that Rangiku didn't sleep with the man she had just met. I love Gin and Rangiku as a couple. They really make a great pair.
I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!
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February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am really feeling this story. You capture Gin nicely, and the story of them discovering love is so sweet. The one complaint i have is this should have been 3 chapters, not 1. And it would have made the first touches more special if you had told the story in chronilogical order. Never underestimate the power of that first touch. I will keep reading and reviewing if you keep writing.
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
my heart broke for poor ran. it sets up nicely how he'll end up hurting her repeatedly for decades to come, sadly. men really can be such pigs, even in manga-land.