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for I'm Glad I Said I'm Sorry

by Ultimania

schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this idea and just started to read your story. There is only one thing bugging me. Dried persimmons take weeks to make and the fruit must be peeled first in order to do so, then hung to dry, then hung to dry again over a heat source. So its not possible for Gin to find them lying around outside, maybe think of something that makes sense. Anyways I'll continue reading now :)
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh and sorry , aizen slashes gin across the chest, then RIPS his arm off, then stabs him. Lol sorry!!!!