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for Strawberry and the Bee

by LeonTasume

person Will
schedule February 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

love this story read it 7 times since you started, my only opinion is based on how soifon is ( know it's a mispell habit), her "thawin out" should have taken more time but i love the way it's presented. Please please please continue i want to see yama-jii's reaction ichi's family's reaction too, hell everyone

schedule April 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You are an inspiration for us all!
schedule March 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Goodness! I have finished all 9 chapters in one day... I want more, I need more.. the story is so engaging, I have yet to find other fanfic that keeps me so captivated and makes me read it line by line. Please tell me that you will continue it!
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
you've been doing a wonderful job in keeping the characters...well, in character. Except for Soi Fong of course, but thats the point of the story. To see her evolution into a somewhat different character than we're used to.

Also, with the way you write, i honestly wouldn't care if lemons went down until chapter 11 or beyond. You've got a decent plot here.

That being said, keep up the good work...but keep it up a tad bit faster, i wanna read more
person JMK2
schedule July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good job keep it up.
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good start and few chapters hope u update it soon
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good god this is good, please post more chapters soon!
person Anon
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very, VERY good fic you have here. It has been a while since i've read one that has a highly engaging story like this with a very interesting pairing as well. I hope you post more chapters soon, can't wait!
person Zelix (Not logged in)
schedule April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very good fic, funny and interesting. I could see this chain of events becoming a side-story arc in the Bleach series itself. Hope to see more chapters soon!
person ben revell
schedule March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is a great start to this story can not wait to see what happens next