rate_review Reviews

This was really good, oddly sudden & left me dying to read more,to see what,if anything more,was going to happen with them.

Haha! He slept at the end. How funny. MEANS ICHIGO SEX WAS BORING! But it wasnt. :troolfayceinsertedhere:

wow, i love it. kinda quirky kinda sweet and veeerrryyy hot lol. ano my only critic would be the amount of italic, probably its just me being bias, but i think it may be more effective to use italic to only emphasise a few key sentences or words that are miles from each other, it may add more drama/depth?.....maybe thats just my personal preference and i'm no writer so i can't really judge >.< keep up the good work!

Car sex sounds quite uncomfortable... but that was hot. Stark is one sexy - if lazy - man. Would he have ever made a move if Ichigo hadn't? His laziness could become a problem if they decide to try for a relationship. And Ichigo was quite lucky his crazy dad didn't decide to come out and see who was in the car stationed in front of their house. I don't know how he would have reacted...
Nice story!

I love stark!! I hope you write more yummy stories!