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by Raceysama

schedule August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fuck. Do you have any idea how difficult it is to consentrate on the theory and shit I'm supposed to be studying when I trip over this?!
I love the story. I am a bit reluctant about everyone turning around and a complete happy ending, but I'm feeling in a ridiculous mood right now, so I'll just appreciate the happy butterflies in my tummy and all the laughs you've given me :). Though I really appreciate that Renji had a reason for his homophobi. Though Rukia did scare me a bit, and I was on the verge of labbling you a basher because her character was so far gone, but you turned it around for me. And lovely detail, that she ends up with Kaien :).
Hitsugaya was Gin's boyfriend but he died?!?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~!!!!!! He had to be ALIVE!! It's the best pairing in the entire world of BLEACH! By the gods, I'm tearing up XD. That might also be because of the rest of the story, but what the hell... XD
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really good!
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Grimm is cute and funny
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Grimm would actually hit her... or Ichi...?
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kisuke, poor Renji and what the fuck is Rukia try to do?
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Every time Grimm touched some new place or sucked or kissed he thought: it should be weird but it's not... every time! in every paragraph! Funny...
person Anon
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
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person A.J.
schedule April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. Your writing is amazing, had me completely drawn in. Also your style is great and I love the fact that you give us a great detail of every scene to paint the picture in my head. Also love the music and dancing, had me laughing so hard thinking about what that looked like. THANK YOU very much for writing and sharing this with us.