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September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was really intense. I just read this for the 1st time & I feel like I'll scream if I don't find out what happens .
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April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Upon review of your story, it was noticed that you cite/quote from another source, but that it is not properly cited.
Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097
Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.
Thank you for your cooperation.
Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097
Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.
Thank you for your cooperation.
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April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your story line. And as the previous review states there are some grammatical errors. It took going back and rereading to even notice the errors. Your errors are not a big problem and I would love it if you could continue writing this story cause I cannot wait to read what happens next.
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April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I do appreciate the attempt you're making here. Your story line is promising.
BUT....there is such a high number of grammatical errors and typos that it's a bit of a disappointment. I really think you should consider finding a beta/proofreader or something to help you out a bit.