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I love this fic, please post more chapters to enjoy. I can’t wait for the babies to arrive.

Love this fic and keep hoping to see more. Szayel is the perfect overly-protective daddy to be especially with his favorite baby-mama. I'm still hoping the girls (except Nemu) all have a baby by Szayel & another by their other hottie, maybe Nemu can have Szayel twins? I can't wait to see the babies & the reactions of the daddies ... Wonder if Szayel will step in if any of the other daddies-to-be decide to leave the situation all in the mama's hands.

Please write more of this fantastic story. I'm so looking forward to seeing the end of the experiment and all the babies.

Please write more. I love this story & want to see the babies. I'm loving Szayel as the wronged bad guy turned hottie magnet (even if it is an experiment). I adore how family/kid oriented Szayel is being. I'm so hoping more than one baby is Szayel's ... Hmmm twins ... One from each potential daddy with each mommy. Szayel would be in his version of heaven with a bunch of little ones around him & cooing.

Please don't let this awesome story die like this. I'm eager to see all of the babies arrive.

Glad you finally had a chance to get a bit further. Hope the seasonal break is doing you well and giving you a chance to reread the fic and find the story threads. I'm loving the chance to see another side of Szayel and the others. I'm loving the possessive and protective displays all the males are displaying ... Szayel still seems to be the alpha male. Honestly I'd still love to see Szayel doing his best to be 'Cupid' and give all the girls a surprise Valentine's Day ... Not that he'd necessarily get everything right since he's not familiar with the holiday or traditions and might be working with incomplete information ... having the other men suspect Szayel is upto something and tailing him while slowly coming to the realization of what he's trying to do would be fun especially if the guys decide to be 'nice' and enlighten him to the bits he had wrong about the traditions. I also can't wait for Baby Day and seeing how everyone reacts. I'm still rooting for Szayel to have several 'cubs' by various mamas. If he does have the affect of increasing fertility in the female Shinigami it is possible that one or more mamas had multiple fertile eggs release and end up fertilized by more than one papa.

Glad you are still writing this fic and hope to see more soon. Thanks for such an entertaining read.

Please continue this lovely fic. I'm dying to see the little bundles arrive and everyone's reactions to the arrivals. I'm also loving how Szayel is proving he isn't quite as bad as everyone assumed all the time.

I hope classes are going well. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

So sorry I didn't review when I read through the story awhile back. At least I don't think I did. I went through the reviews and couldn't find my name. I must have read this one early on when I first found this site. I haven't started reviewing religiously until a few weeks ago. Anyway, I'll have to reread the story to give an honest review. I do remember that I was enjoying the story so it won't be hard to reread. I will probably wait until you update though. It helps when your story pops to the top of the Latest list. So, hope you get back to it soon.

Please update soon. I miss seeing the interactions and complications so much. I especially love how Szayel is able to show that regardless of his background he knows how to be respectful, thoughtful, and caring in his relations with the women. It is fun to see all the posturing the men do to.

Hope classes are doing well this semester.