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May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful fic. I'd love to see a follow on chapter or two dealing with the changes in how they respond to each other after this visit; especially if she did get pregnant due to not using protection. I'm curious whether she'd become a target for experimentation once her condition and the father of her baby are determined by her commander. Or would it be possible that her actions have been secretly noted on hidden surveillance equipment and she is subsequently ordered to continue in order to monitor his responses and the potential for controlled genetic manipulation of new DNA into the shinigami genome. (could so see The captain wanting to experiment with the mixing of new DNA strains and combinations). Would one or both happily go along with his wishes or would either balk at the request. Would other potential mates, for different DNA combinations of course, be sent to him; leaving him to feel like little more than a stud-bull once all other tests have been completed? Is Szayel the monogamous type or would he prefer multiple female partners (not necessarily meaning a threesome/moresome but seeing Nemu in the morning and Isane in the afternoon perhaps). Would he be protective of his perceived mate (prior mates of his could have died already due to the hazardous environments of Hueco Mundo) or is he more like a tom-cat that takes no interest once he's gotten her pregnant. Seeing his and her psychological changes to her pregnancy and the eventual arrival of the baby/babies would be interesting. Personally I know what I'd like to see but it would be nice to see your interpretation of the unfolding events. Also would he temporarily go for several partners before settling for one or two, or if he takes multiple partners would he view them as his private harem and be possessive of each?