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Sigh ... Guess SF is on summer vacation? Can't wait to see what happens next.

Hope you are having a wonderful summer. Can't wait to see another chapter with our lovely pink-haired bishi-beast with his adoring harem. ... Still hoping he has a boatload of adorable cherubs of his own and think twins with two different daddies for each girl (except Nemu) would be great. If his presence increases fertility I wonder if any non-participating females will become preggers (Unohana? Isane?) and if so how the associated male will react. I could see Ukitake staying with Unohanna and babies. Yumichika might need more persuading or someone might have to volunteer to take his place....

Hugs mofaf1

I hope you're doing ok and your computer is running ok again. I'm loving the story and looking forward to more of our lovely pink haired espada and his Mayuri induced harem. I know Soi Fon is hidden near by and she or her little girl could make an appearance. Seeing the interactions of the various girls and guys in all combinations is enjoyable and wondering if any/all of the pregnancies go to term without complications peeks some interest. If proximity to Szayel does induce egg development I wonder how many of the expectant mamas will have more than one child and how many will have children of mixed blood ... Yes I'd like to see Szayel wrong in his hypothesis and overjoyed at being a daddy to multiple little cherubs.

Hugs and hope to hear from you soon.

Mofaf1

Sounds like the girls are going to have that slumber party ... Wonder if the boys will crash it and what everyone's thoughts/ topics of conversation will be ...

Squeeeeee you finally came back ... And with a wonderful new chapter too. Hopefully you have a bit of time to devote to catching up with the story again and can get a few more chapters up in the not too distant future (maybe a glimpse of Szayel soon too?).

Hope you did well in classes and decide to plunge into the fantasy realms for the summer.

Huggles, it's so nice to see you back. *dances with happiness*

glad to see this continue. given we are on ch34, i really hope that soon, it will be revealed that the pregnancies all have different daddies. also hope that creepy/evil mayuri gets in a whole lot of trouble for his abuses. even in the dark ages of scientific experimentation, i think subjects were treated more humanely than szayzel is treated in story. then there's his abuses of nemu too--surely there has to be some minimal standard mayuri must hold to? maybe unohana is secretly recording while she is there & will submit her evidence to central 46, & in the last or 2nd to last chap, he'll be put on trial--fingers crossed!

hope shunsui is 1st to learn he's gonna be a papa. can't wait for his jovial expression to be described. then toshiro--he tries to be so expressionless that having him smile or laugh will make the scene pop.

hope we get some nemu/szazel love next chap.

it occurred to me that given the # of pregnancies relative to how infrequently they seem to happen in canon bleach-verse, that it could be explained as sex w/szayzel somehow making it a lot easier for the subsequent sperm from shinigami to penetrate ova more easily. maybe the hollow sperm could be said to weaken the egg's membrane or to make the uterine conditions more favorable or some other pseudo-scientific plausible bleachy explanation, with nanao's being just a coincidence since she didn't have sex with him, or that just being around the hollow reiatsu alone was enough to cause a weakening in the cell wall of the ova & that was why nanao got knocked up too. to make things perfect, isane & unohana could get pregnant too.

Looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Hope Szayel has lots of surprises ... Maybe a few can have twins ... A few moms had multiple eggs available and the resulting babies have him as daddy while a sibling might have a different daddy ... A few inconclusives might be nice too.

Hon, I hope you are doing well. I've been worried because you've been gone so long without even a status update.

Huggles,

Guess it's taking longer than hoped to get the compie back. Maybe after finals? Can't wait to see all the wonderful twists and turns the plot bunnies have been whispering to you. Best of luck on the finals and hope your PROPERLY FIXED computer is awaiting you as a reward.

Eagerly awaiting your future posts,
Mofaf1

Sadness ... Still no update on your classes or compie situation so I'm having to surmise that classes have you swamped ... compie is still not available/fixed ... and that we will have to wait for summer break to start in the next two to four weeks. At any rate, don't let the bunnies overwhelm you ... Write them down or tap the bare bones out and save to a flash drive. Do well in classes. Ace your finals (or do your best at least). And if on spring break, have fun and stay safe. Will keep peeking in for status or story update.