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I don't mind sex in fics, but what was the point here? You should have just kept this a Grimmjow/Ulquiorra pairing.

P.S. Your smut needs work.

Hello! I just got back from vacation and was thrilled to see that this story was updated! I think that this is by far one of my favorite fanfics of all times. It probably didn't hurt that Ulquiorra and Grimmjow are by far my two favorite characters, well at least I think that they are by far the two hottest! Like I have said before, I think you are such a talented writer! I wouldn't be suprised if you actually have a career in writing or at least went to school for it. I love all your descriptions, when I read your stories, I am always watching the movie in my head. I love how your sex scenes are always so hot, yet you always have amazing plot too! It really is hard to find such a wonderful combination, yet you make it seem so easy! I am amazed that this story first began 'cuz you wanted Grimmjow to do Ulquiorra while he was asleep. You took that one hot idea and made it into an incredible story! I love how this story was kinda strange and I kept trying to figure out what was really going on. And I loved the end. It was a fascinating story that made complete sense when all the puzzle pieces were put together. I love stories and movies that keep you thinking the whole time, trying to figure out what is really going on; but nothing makes me crazier than when the ending leaves you going WTF? and you end up more confused after reading/watching in than when you began. So yeah, after that ramble, I really loved the ending; I had guessed that they were perhaps dead, but never thought of the whole purgatory thing. Well, I guess I have rambled on for far too long......and you have also updated "Sex and Football" too......Wow, this really is my lucky day! Thank you so much for having such awesome ideas and then taking the time to write stories and then post them here! I pray that your inspiration continues, 'cuz as long as you keep on writing, I will keep on reading!

Great story!! I love this two so much.

Dang both Ideas sound really good! I'll miss this story, do you know the ending made me cry? I'm still crying. I feel so bad for Ulquiorra and Grimmjow and I don't even know why. You do an awesome job.

I did not see that coming! I loved this story. I also loved the freaky-nasty sex. I'm wishing you could have made Grimmy/Stark more yummy and disturbing, but oh well. Maybe you could write something with Stark in it. I'd like to think his lazy demeanor belies his sexual appetite! I do think I would like to read the bachelor party story before the other. I can't imagine that you won't write both eventually. I look foward to whatever you choose. You're the bestest! Thanks for all your hard work.

I can't think of any way to change it or of any need to change it, I was just making a comment really. I also try out new things, they don't always work, but Its fun to do so. I love this story, its so much fun to read and you are AMAZING!

FUH-KIN AWESOME!!!!!!! I'm dying to know if Ulquiorra has ended up in Grimmjows desert too? I loved the scene with Yammy. Gotta love the man for wantin his piece-o-ass conscious! LOL It was all very sexy. Thanks for all your hard work. You are my favorite perv after all!

Loving this story! And I do hope Grimmy and Ulquiorra are able to get out together.

You just made my day! I was so psyched to see you updated! And I TOTALLY LOVED the new chapter and I was so HAPPY to read that you have 2 more planned! Like I have said before, I am so IN LOVE with your writing! You are by far my favorite author here on AFF! I am curious, how do you come up with all your ideas for your stories? Thanks for all your stories and I hope you never lose your inspiration! Can't wait for the next update......

You never fail to delight! This story is so out of the norm for you, but your attention to detail shines in every paragraph! Please don't let this fall to the wayside. I really would like to see where this story goes. Thanks for all the updating you've been doing lately. I squeal like a little girl every time I see you've updated.