rate_review Reviews

Great fic I think you stopped it at the right place.

Cute story. Can't wait for next chapter. 8D

I like the current ending just fine. Good story!

I think this is much better than the initial ending that you had. I kind of like when endings leave more to the imagination, where as the other ending you had was just depressing, lol. Don't get me wrong I love stories with hints of angst, but I love this better because I enjoy the fact that Ichigo and Grimmjow are able to comfort each other from the emptiness and loneliness. Adding Renji to the story puts that in danger because he always seems like the type without too much open mind (i.e Ichigo being with a Hollow or more so that hollow being Grimmjow). It's just seems to be in his character.

Another great one-shot. I can't wait for the next one you come up with.

I love what a weird creep Urahara was, and that Grimmjow was the one with the most common sense out of the two. XD I admit, I am glad you didn't write the ending you'd planned on. I really do hate downer endings.