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for Become My God

by TheresMoneyInThis

person JamieGib
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nicely dark and twisty tortured. I can kind of see the prickly Soi Fon finding completion in surrender because her character tries so hard to be the one who's always in charge, but we know from the past that she likes to obey, so...you can understand this happening to her. Your story, however, is just extra macabre.