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Love this fic and POV arc 1. Can't think of any names on the spur of the moment but will send any I think of. Am hoping Szayel will get to be a mama again ... soon ... with a mate of his own. Too bad Shinigami are not allowed to mate with Hollows. Unless, perhaps, those 'disowned' by the SS chose to experiment with a 'forbidden' pairing. Otherwise I'm guessing Grimmjow and Szayel will get a bit frisky while Ichigo's got a bun or more in his oven....

Very nice chapter. I was also concerned about the 5 year time skip but you worked it in nicely. I was shocked by the triplets, it was a nice surprise though. I hope Szayel finds a mate of his own, if he gets 'frisky' with Grimmjow then maybe this story should be labeled Grimmjow/Szayel AND Grimmjow/Ichigo :/

I loved this chapter! I have been waiting for this since the first few chapters, somehow I knew Ichigo would let Grimmjw top him eventually, he's that nice. =)
I can't wait for the next chapter at this point, and even though I do not review each chapter, know that I have been reading this from the beginning. ^.^
Is it wrong if I want H'tsu to give Szayel another brat? Maybe... maybe... H'tsu can be nice too, somehow...........?

Chap 41: Yay! So glad to see when this story is at the top of the "Latest" list. I've reread it a few times, now. I quite like their little set up and love Ichigo being the leader. Although I was concerned about the 5 year skip, I feel you did an excellent job of covering the span. It's very true that most normal boring lives can zip by 5 years easily without anything memorable happening. Mine, case in point. Ichigo's schooling would definitely make for a consistent routine, and refurbishing Los Noches would also take up much time, not to mention just daily kidlet activities which the previous chapter portrayed.

I was surprised at Ichigo's decision, mainly because of H'tsu, but also because it wasn't mentioned that it was on his mind, that I recall. I guess H'tsu's guidance isn't needed so much anymore, Ichigo is confident in his position and still the King of the two, and made the decision despite H'tsu.

So does this give him the opportunity to invite a second Beta, Szayel, into the dynamic? I hope so.
Did he have this in the back of his mind? I suspect it.
Will he really exhibit the same traits of a Beta that Grimm did? Not entirely.
Or will it be different for him because of his Human and Shinigami sides? I think so.

Now I worry about what you have in store for the den-mates . You're sneaky about throwing a wrench into a well-oiled machine and happily, ever after doesn't make sense, plot-wise. As always, I look forward to reading more.

I hope Grimmjow doesn't really decide to mate with Szayel. I like the fact that Grimm and Ichigo are exclusive to each other. But it's your story, you call the shots. I do understand that. And i even understand why Grimm is considering it, he needs Szayel to feed any future cubs. I get it, i'm just bothered by him getting intimate with someone other than Ichigo. I was hoping they would find another way around the feeding issues. I don't have anything against threesomes, but it's kinda sounding like since Ichigo has no sexual interest in Szayel at all, that Grimm will just mate him alone. So no threesome there. Just know that everything in this story, up until the epilogue, i have enjoyed reading very much.

That was soooo hot, pant, pant. I'm still laughing, thinking, about how Ichigo looked to the two drunks :D! I don't care that it take,s or will take, a little while for you to update, you have a little one, it is totally understandable. I really loved how you explained the pack dynamics. I like how Yuzu and Karin are part of the pack, and their places make sense too. I haven't had time to read at all lately and I hope I have time to read Prize of Victory too. I just want you to know how much I appreciate you continuing both stories. I absolutely love your writing style, and who cares about a couple of spelling errors, they aren't enough to distract you from the story, at all. Thank you and keep up your wonderful writing! :)

Thanks for the update!

I think a 5 year time skip will be interesting and look forward to it!

Oh! I laughed so hard my head was flung back. Just picturing what Ichigo looked like to the drunks. Still snickering. That was a good scene. Sigh.

I never considered that Karin and Yuzu would be part of the pack. Even though they're Ichigo's sisters, I guess I thought it would be only hollows because that's their culture, not human's. Make's me wonder about how else they would fit in, especially if you're going to skip 5 years. However, if Ichigo and Grimm are just about finished their mating cycle, then I'm confused about jumping 5 years. I'd hope you'd explain how they dealt with it through flashback or something cause I can't imagine them being in a holding pattern for 5 years. I almost wondered, given how Ichigo is stretched so thin, and Grimm was concerned about keeping Szayel in the pack, whether Grimm would mate Szayel and Ichigo would get time off, so to speak. That kinda seems wrong, though, and I don't know how that could be managed successfully. At least, H'stu couldn't complain about Ichigo being a Beta. He'd just be an unmated Alpha, maybe even still the pack Alpha.

So glad you updated again so soon. This chapter gave me a lot to think about and satisfied my craving for more from it. If you do jump 5 years, will you start another plot line? It doesn't feel like a wrap up.

I like the story and it is an interesting twist.

I thought this was a wonderful chapter. Nothing heavy, fun filled and lighthearted and it made for a very enjoyable read. The cubs are even more adorable now that they are getting bigger and developing personalities.