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for The Real King

by NovaAlexandria

schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay for updates and boo for teases of smutty fun time only to be interrupted by hatching eggs lol. But that was another WONDERFUL chapter. Can't wait to find out what the new baby looks like <3
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
fantastic chapter!!!!!!! im glad that h'tsu got his ass kicked! update soon!
schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha the picture of that cute little kitty-cat chomping down on someones hand like that! Drawing blood, being praised by "mommy" and everything... Oh it's to freaking funny! Another great update :)
And CONGRATS on having a little boy to look after now :) I hope he lets you have some time to type ;)
person clauds
schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh man that was an exciting read n funny when the bite took place lol well peace till next time :}
person DisPie Swag
schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've been keeping an eye on this story for ages and it hasn't disappointed me at any part, in fact, this story continues to get better and better the further we go! I’m so excited and can hardly wait until the next chapter comes out!
Please keep it coming! You’re a spot-on writer and you’re amazingly good with your spelling, grammar and use of adjectives which really brings this to life. You do have a few mistakes but they're hardly noticeable at all. ;)

Can’t wait for more, love DisPie Swag
person Rangikun
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
COngratulations!!! Otsukaresamadeshita!! (Thank you for the hard work in Japanese)

Thank you for uploading a chapter even when you're busy with your baby boy.

This is a sweet chapter~ And imagining Byakuya with a bruised pride is hillarious for me. It will be great if Renji was along, I am pretty sure he will be smitten with Cachorro & Hijastro as well. They sound adorable! *muacks*
Pity Syazel, he has to worry about both adult(H'tsu) & Children. There are just soo many things on his mind and I am glad at least the girls are helping him out, he deserves it.

Just a little request here, can you write a scene of Yoruchi & her interaction with the cubs? Well, Yoruichi is a Kitty and so are are the cubs, So i am curious of the way you portray them together. Not to mention that Yoruichi can start mentor-ing them on some skills.

Thank you for uploading this chapter and take care!!
------^----<@ Rose for you & kisses for your baby boy~ <3
person KyuRyu
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Congratz! And thanks for taking the time to put a chapter out even with a new baby! Still my top story at the moment, and one of the very few I read as chapters are put out rather than waiting until the story is completed.
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! I've been reading all morning and am finally caught up! You are talented at keeping me at the edge of my seat. I just wish H'tsu would come around and stop being such a sadistic freak, I feel horrible for Szayel. But I love the concept, hell, I burst with pride every time an egg hatches, lol. Please continue!
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
fantastic chapter!!!!! wonderful as always!! you'll have to tell us your sons name next chapter!!! I'm sure he's adorable! ^-^
person ShichiSan
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and I can't wait to read more. Just the way in which you describe things I can see it in my mind. Your level of skills amaze me. Someday I hope to right even half as well as you.