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for The Real King

by NovaAlexandria

person Chrissy
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, long too. I loved it. I was surprised (and very happy) to see you write about Ukitake in this one. He is one of my favorite characters other than Ichigo and Grimmjow. I was pleased that the cubs accepted him.

Congratulations on your new baby, i wish you and your family lots of good health and happiness. Take care x
person claudea
schedule June 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! This story is neat didn't think it was gonna be good but my baby sis said it was good so read it n loved it hope u update sometime cause its good well peace till some other time:)
person JOler
schedule May 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hon, I hope you are doing well. I've been worried because you've been gone so long without even a status update.
person Kristin
schedule May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow another great couple of chapters. I love how they fixed up the vizards warehouse, it sounds pretty awesome. H'tsu pisses me off and I feel sorry for Szayel. I hope all is well with your pegnancy. Keep up the awesome work!
person Chrissy
schedule May 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
They fixed the old Vizard's warehouse up really nice, and the play area sounds like something i would like for my own cats enjoyment. I hope they can find an alternative way to feed the cubs soon. I never thought i'd be saying these words, but i'm feeling a little sorry for Szayel. He will have 3 cubs to feed soon and now H'tsu is sneaking out to torment him again. Poor thing. Will be looking forward to the new chapter, as always.
schedule May 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Stellar chapter! You gotta love when you get so wrapped up in a story that your heart goes out to characters that you once wished fiery death to lol.
person lemmy
schedule April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally got around to reading to the latest, and got to say, I'm really enjoying it. The kids are cute, Ichi and Grim seem happy, and the family interactions are so fun. I look forward to more, keep up the good work.
schedule April 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yet another AMAZING chapter :) And the second baby came out a lot cuter then I was picturing. I can't wait for more!!!
person Anon
schedule April 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOL @ Ichigo's Hollow...

Now I'm curious how Szayel died.

... loving the story since the first chapter. :)
person Aviary
schedule April 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was very well done and hot let's not forget that :p Good work!