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for The Real King

by NovaAlexandria

person Aviary
schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually find Ichigo appealing at just because he is over used, but Grimm-Ji has always been a favorite and I love how you've changed things up a bit in your story Nova :) I find myself eager for this stories updates as I have been with Prize of Victory and Lover's come together, I did enjoy Panthera's story and the other HMK's as well. Keep up the good work and I hope you're doing well.
person Chrissy
schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'll never get tired of reading fics with Ichigo in them. Like i said before, Ichigo/Grim fics are hard to find. I also like him paired with Aizen and those are even more rare. I liked Unohana's thoughts on Cachorro at the beginning of the chapter and how most everyone assembled at the meeting liked his picture that she passed around. I'm glad that Kurotushci is being forced out of Las Noches. I hope he wont cause any more problems for Ichigo and his pack.

I'm wondering if Grimmjow will remain with Ichigo after their cub is older. I know he wants more cubs with Ichigo, but i hope they stay together...if it takes babies to keep them mated, i hope they have lots of them lol.
person JOler
schedule April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dealing with end of the semester insanity here ... Love the last two chapters. Can't wait to see all the babies and the new interactions coming up.

Personally I have felt since the flashback episodes showing Kisuke getting then losing his captaincy ... That Kurotsuchi was working for Aisen behind the scenes, then that Aisen dumped him as excess baggage when he, Tosen, and Gin left; he had already created at least some espada and that might easily have included Szayel. It was just too convenient for Aisen to be able to set Kisuke up that quickly without someone on the inside ... and it isn't like Kurotsuchi would have viewed his emprisonment as justified. Since Kisuke was his most visible jailer I can easily see Kurotsuchi taking his revenge out on Kisuke.
person Kristin
schedule April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeah everything went according to plan! I wish you could give Kurotsuchi (sorry for the spelling) a bloody end too, but you are right about how the Soul Society does things. I am so excited to see Hijastro and see how the pack comes along. Keep up the amazing work!
person Vi
schedule April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Kurotsuchi deserves a violent end, can we find a way to shove him back into the maggots nest?
Ichigo...I hope you kept Szayel's natural beta info to yourself. Rare yes, knowing that their is only one person able to feed your cub and possibly every other male/male Arrancar to is just painting a bit bulls-eye on his back. Kill me off! *pets Szayel* least your cub is hatching nest. I wonder what or who Hijistro will take after.
Maybe Renji and Ishida will be a bit more relaxed after the cub hatches. Szayel did crush their organs, tendons, all sorts of tender bits.
person kel
schedule April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
fantastic!!!!! i can't wait for the next chapter and our next cub! is he going to look like a bird? Szayel's resurrección form had wings didn't it? update soon!!
schedule April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Serve you right, Kurotsuchi!! I'm glad the meeting went well. Now Ichigo is technically the king of Las Noches, right? I hope he will get used to being a king soon. *giggle*
person kel
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic as always!! i cant wait for whats next!!!! ^-^
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Go! Go, Ichigo!! Don't let Kurotsuchi get away easily! I'm so excited the pack is getting big. I bet it'd be more lively (and more tiresome for Szayel). XD
person Mary Lou
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another exciting chapter! It seems that Ichigo has finally gotten the whole being the Alpha down pat. He has taken charge, down to offering the rescued arrancar a chance to join his pack or leave. Ichigo and Grimmjow got to bond while they destroyed Mayuri's division. I must admit to being totally surprised upon finding out it was Yylfordt who was the mystery arrancar. Hooray for Uryuu and Chad being heroes also. Cannot wait to meet the new cubs. I loved that Szayel had the courage to speak up at the end and exerted his superiority over Yylfordt and Tesla. By the way, Happy Easter!