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by NovaAlexandria

person JOler
schedule March 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Both blonds are male? Guess Haribel isn't one of them. Hmmm will stick with Tesra ... The other might be Nel's fractionne Pesche?

Still think Starrk and Ulquiorra would be relatively cooperative if still alive; Nel would probably be cooperative as well. Nnoitra would probably resist unless he was guaranteed the alpha position and he'd probably want Nel to be the one he dominated (he let her live the last time they fought).

Again I will say, I'm limited to CN for my viewing so I'm only half way through the winter war and not sure of anyone's status during the time frame of the story. (unless of course Szayel had pulled a serious fast one on Aisen and the shinigami ... cloning all the arrancar after evolving via the hogyouku then all of them leaving their clones to watch events transpire while safely tucked away elsewhere). But cloning would give duplicates of a few arrancar and really send Mayuri swooning.

Anyway ... if I have to guess with my limited knowledge I'd have to say ...

Two blond males? Tesra and Pesche (though the female Haribel would have been interesting)

Two relatively doscile ...

If both male ... Ulquiorra and Starrk

If male/female ... Nel and Nnoitra (provided he's guaranteed the alpha position)
person Tweedleedee
schedule March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Just wanted to tell you how much of a (rabid)fan I am of your Real King, and, therefore, you. Thank God you decided to save Szayel and his cub!
And you're right, it's been too long since the last IchiGrimm goodness. Can't wait...
schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness!! I hope both Szayel and his baby will be alright. Well, I don't know who the specimens are. My thought is one of them probably is Tesra. Can't wait to read the next chapter. XD
schedule March 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I accidentally bashed my head on the back of the couch at the end of the chapter not knowing if Szayel and the cub are alright. What can I say, he's grown on me as a character. Also, I do enjoy reading about the larger cast interacting (especially Uryuu~) with the main characters and whatnot. I still can't wait to read more about Cacharro because I'm already so in love with him. Lastly, yes, a kicking baby is a healthy, strong baby, haha.
person NightXIV
schedule March 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awe, I hope Szayel and the baby are okay.
Ooh~ Why am I just finding out that you're with baby? Congrats >w<
person Mary Lou
schedule March 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, well, well. You have managed to surprise me once again. I never imagined Mayuri having captured various arrancar. Of course, we did not actually see everyone die, so it could be possible that some have surived the final battle. Now I am not very good at guessing who the arrancar are. I am assuming that the brown-eyed one is Tesla, but that is far as I can go. I have to admit that I am disappointed that Uryuu and Szayel won't be getting together, but I sure hope that Uryuu is featured more. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Great job as usual!
person Saka_Sandora
schedule March 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Maybe I'm just stupid, I can't figure out who they are (A X's). I really hope Szayel is going to be okay along with his baby. Darnyou for ending it there!
person JOler
schedule March 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
50 & 15 ... 2 blonds ... Tesra & Harribel (only two 'mature' blonds I can think of).
24 & 56 ... No real hints ... Starrk & Ulquiorra (both would be relatively non-violent and somewhat reasonable if approached properly).
If Nnoitra, Yammy, or Barragan participate they will insist on being the alpha. I suppose any of the fractiones could be there as well but Lilinette would probably be seen as too young and she is the only other blond I can think of (even Tesra might balk at mating someone who appears that young). I'm guessing Nel is with the good guys ... Possibly her fractiones as well. Can't really see risking putting two former fractiones of the same arrancar or the arrancar and his/her fractione together to breed.

hmmm ... I'm guessing Szayel survived since you are not finished torturing him but ... his cub is probably either gone or soon will be (poor Szayel). At least H'Tsu will have to admit Szayel had to choose ... protect the alpha's cub as ordered (by Ichigo AND instinct) or save himself and their cub (possibly bringing down the wrath of one or both alpha parents. Ichigo made it clear which he felt was more important to him and made the final choice if it came down to it. I'm surprised they couldn't let Orahime try to repair Szayel while they joined forces to heal the cub. While the cub was still forming riatsu, Szayel has a definite physical form. I suppose if he lost the baby, Orahime might be asked to heal some of his more serious injuries once he's stabilized. I'm guessing Ichigo will have to go back in to retrieve the packets that were left ... or they're currently stuffed in a bag somewhere and forgotten until things calm down. So glad Cachorro was well accepted, even though Chad will probably be a bit amused by the names because he does speak Spanish (the native language of the espada). If Szayel loses the baby it will be interesting to see who he might end up with (if anyone ... though given his Natural Born Beta nature to seak a strong mate I can't see him not evaluating the new possibilities in his new environment, especially with the potentially viable baby-daddies now pretty much including all interested (and not so interested) candidates. He could watch the humans, visords, shinigami, and few other hollows (Grimmjow, possibly Nel or her fractiones), he might even include the liberated zanpakto Zangetsu (guessing the zanpakto rebellion disn't happen) and start logging positive and negative qualities in order to decide who he should start subtly flirting with.

Pout ... if his riatsu is too low to register so he comes across as human ... Szayel ... would make such a pretty pink-haired classic beauty (tall, slim, graceful, elegant, intelligent, and refined) ... the perfect (apparent) female to make Byakuya's heart flutter ... he might even concider taking a non-shinigami mate (but be clueless about the true nature of his heart's desire). please try to do a Szayel turns female ficcie ... Hugs in advance.

Your energy should start improving once the baby is born and sleeping through the night. Hope you feel better.
person JOler
schedule March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hope you are getting more rest and feeling better.

I wonder if the lowered energy will initiate a change to a more compact and energy-efficient female form since females require less food to maintain the same body weight and energy level as a male. I'd still love to see Szayel have a bevy of male shinigami suitors / knights in shining armor trying to woo 'her' ... even if 'she' is expecting (Byakuya might even see it as proof that 'she' is healthy and fertile and could provide the requisit heir and get his elders to ease up in that regard - even if he does believe 'her' to be little more than a highly spiritually aware human). Discovery of Szayel's true gender and nature could be confessed but not believed until permanent ties are formed (after the current baby is weaned ... and another possibly on the way?) I just think it would be amusing to see some of the more reserved and aloof male captains be smitten by the 'tall, willowy, and delicate beauty that is able to see and interact with them .... and is incredibly alluring because she is so elusive and plays hard to get ...' LOL And we all know H'Tsu would be furious ... but what would Ichigo and Grimmjow think of the situation? I believe Ichigo asked about 'mixed packs' a few chapters back ... you really couldn't get much more mixed than a pack with all of Ichigo's aspects, two arrancar, a hollow cub, a hollow-human hybrid cub ... and a shinigami spouse to the pack Omega with a possible hollow-shinigami cub on the way ... (snicker). Introducing the in-laws would definitely be ... interesting.
person KyuRyu
schedule March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cliffie! *bangs head on nearest surface* waaa!!

I love this story, you are an amazing author and I will buy any book you publish. I am officially a completly dedicated fan XD