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Whine ... don't wanna see Szayel go bye bye ... and don't want the baby lost either. Glad Szayel was able to protect the baby and hope he can be saved. It's nice to see Grimmjow and Ichigo both caring for him so much (though I think it is because he's the baby's food source as far as Grimmjow will be willing to admit for now). Too bad Ichigo didn't knock out everyone after his speach to Kurosutchi ... and then make sure Kurosutchi was left alive in the same shape as Szayel ... with a few 'insignificant' body parts destroyed but left attached between his legs. Now I really want to see Szayel turn female and enchant Byakuya by "playing hard to get" and being incredibly shy and mysterious. A multiple way battle for Szayel's affections in the living realm ... Between H'Tsu, Isshen, Kisuke, and Byakuya ... possibly others of your choice... and interrupted by a kidnapping attempt by Kurosutchi would be epic (even though Kurosutchi would find the outcome less than desirable). Either way I don't want to see any pack members lost. I wonder if Orahime can heal Szayel and help him keep the cub. I can see Isshen twittering around as a happy grandpa while Kisuke takes a shine to his new adult charge (Szayel).

Hope you feel better soon and the baby lets you sleep. Hmmmm ... If you have two bathrooms you might get your significant other to push your desk, computer, and a pile of pillows and blankets to the room so you can just stay there to sleep in a semi-upright position (less pressure on the back that way) and make mad dashes for the potty less likely. It would also allow you to type when awake and not be doing sprints back and forth. Hmmm and can take impromptu naps when the need hits ... and be in the perfect position for lower back rubs when offered ... And he can have the other bathroom.

I am so sorry that I have not commented before this time. I want to say that I absolutely love this story! When I first spotted this story, I was afraid that it was going to be another excuse for sex between Grimmjow and Ichigo. I am so happy that this is not the case. You write really well, helping your readers to visualize each setting so nicely. I am anxious to see how things are going to fare for our little pack. There is only one other thing that would make this story perfect for me, and that is to include Uryuu in it. I can just see him taking care of Szayel. Uryuu is small, but mighty strong where it counts. He is also smart, which would be pleasing to Szayel. I realize that Szayel will still have to account to Hitsu, but I believe that you could work that all out just fine. Just a thought. Not begging, oh no. Well, maybe just a little. Keep up the good work!

Time to head back to the living world i guess! i somehow doubt sticking around would be in any way sane now that the psyco nutcase knows where they are! Can't wait for the next chapter! update soon!!!!!!

You are so mean, but I did honestly expect Kurosuchi to do something like this. I hope Szayel doesn't lose his child, you've already put him through so much shit he should at least get something from all this, although I also know that things like this would happen. So i'm on the fence, but am hopeing for a happier ending.

Wow, what a really cute chapter. I can't wait to see everyone's reacton to Cachorro and if he will change his form once he gets a little older. I love how Grimmjow is changing little by little from being around Ichigo. Hey don't worry about taking some extra time to update. I love your story, it is the best IchixGrim Fic there is, I can't wait to read more, keep up your amazing work!

I giggled while I was reading this chapter. The cub is so adorable. And Grimmjow acted like the madam of the house. LOL

Fantastic~ Part of me is concerned because Cachorro doesn't express wanting to play with the lizard, leading me to believe that he possibly takes after Ichigo in that he doesn't want to 'fight', but I'm probably just reading too much into things xD After all, babies always get too rough with things when they hit that age. I can't believe how cute the little one is, and I'm glad that Grimmjow is slowly changing, because it's believable that way. It's very in-character for him to react to Ichigo's presence slowly, but even more so now that some of the Beta hormones are gone. :3

Hope all goes well with you and the baby.

Actually, since Szayel's riatsu is so low, would a shinigami be able to tell he was a hollow of any level at the moment? If the answer is that Szayel's riatsu is low enough to be mistaken for a high riatsu possessing human ... and if he managed to switch to female during the last half of his pregnancy, it would be great for an active and most sought after shinigami captain (eh speaking of Byakuya here) to draw the short straw and be sent to investigate and ask questions about Ichigo's recent unexplained disappearance. Ichigo and pack camp out in Kisuke's 'basement'. Byakuya arrives to do the questioning and catches sight of Ichigo and his new, and obviously very intelligent, tutor. He sees the tutor as not only intelligent but well mannered, polite, and incredibly attractive. She is tall, willowy, pearl-like skin, eyes like the sun, and hair of such a delicate shade of pink ... she makes him think of a fragile, Sakura-kissed butterfly ... HIS Sakura-kissed butterfly. totally smitten. ... Poor Szayel being wooed by Byakuya (it would be hilarious when 'she' kept being coy and evasive ... and he persued more and more intently ... only to finally have one (or more) of the males who are in the know explain just who and what Szayel is).

Oh I absolutely loved this chapter! It was sooo cute. When the cub was born and he wouldn't eat the meat, I knew he had to want milk, it was the only other possible thing. I didn't know Sayzel (sorry if I spelled it wrong) would be able to bresatfeed him, but that fit really well and it was nice to see Grimmjow's mommy instinct in action. I really hope that you update soon, although I know how it is with a baby, I have two- a six year old and a three year old, so good luck, I can't wait, this story is awesome!

Another fantastic chapter! the kittens cute i can't wait to see Isshin's reaction to his grandson ^-^ wonder what the vizards will think of him? update soon!!!!