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Guess the shower scene was ok... Figure that is what you want the opinion on most.

Hmmm ... was hoping Ichigo would figure out a way to bind and gag H'Tsu with his (H'Tsu's) own soul ribbon ... just to put him in his place (and wishfully get a laugh out of Zangetsu ...) Though if Ichigo offers Szayel the choice of 'refreshing his markers' with H'Tsu or Zangetsu and Szayel chooses Zangetsu ... that could be hillarious too (including a furious H'Tsu's response as well as a completely flabbergasted Zangetsu's response ~ since Ichigo didn't bother informing Zangetsu his attentions would be offered so that Ichigo could 'remain true to Grimmjow').

Really gotta wonder what Szayel is writing now ... and if Ichigo is gonna tell Grimmjow that his reason for being so 'close' to Szayel earlier was because Szayel was tutoring him in Science ... and for all his awesome magnificence Grimmjow just doesn't have what it takes to tutor him in Science ... (yer hot Grimmjow but ya just ain't got the brains to take care of this little need ... and Szayel does).

>> just wanted to say thanks for up dating x3 I really
Enjoy this story, and to know that you still write it and are trying to finish it make
Me really happy xD and I recall on on your other story which I love,that you were pregnant..I wish you the best of look and hope you have a healthy child
And life ^_^

~I suppose Im your otaku now XD lol

Nice chapter. It seems that Grimmjow is starting to identify with the omega even if it's because Ichigo got mad at him first. If Ichigo can materialize Zangetsu can he do it to H'tsu too? Is there more to what H'tsu did to Szayel? It seems like more happened. I can't wait till the egg is hatched. I want to see what their child will be like and Ichigo's friends and family will react.

Hugs hon. Love the fic so far ... Hope ya like the two furry little monsters I tossed to ya over the last few months (and the rare pair request).

So glad Grimmjow is having a change of heart toward Szayel (Szayel is a scientist and curious by nature ... and curiosity is something a cat should more or less understand ... ). Ichigo's gonna have to point out his homework and how little time he has to get it done ... tell Grimmjow he has a tutor in the human world to help him with it but that person isn't here obviously ... so Grimm has two choices, either help Ichigo himself, or get over it and let Szayel take it easy and tutor him while Grimmjow enjoys hunting (Ichigo needs the help with his lessons and the tutoring might help Szayel heal some of his non-physical injuries ... a win-win type of situation).

Absolutely loved the new chapter! So much emotional stuff going on, even for Grimmjow! ^^

Thanks so much for the update and keep up the great work!

fantastic as always!!! update soon i can't wait for the egg to hatch ^-^ will it be a kitten like grimms Adjuchas form or be a human looking child? i would think that the panther kitten or something like that would make more sence because you were saying that the child would generally have to fend for themselves right? I see that being more reasonable as a cat then a human baby. update soon!!!

Hmmm ... Quick note ...reread the first four chapters ... Two months until hatching is stated but the timeline still doesn't seem to add up right when reading the series of events.

Also, Grimmjow states all his previous mates died, not that any miscarried, yet later in the fic he sadly reminisces about some of his mates miscarrying.

Awesome new chapter as always. I went ahead and reread chapter 4 and Grimmjow states that after a month of the DNA and reitsu swirling around is his stomach it forms into an egg and is expelled from the body. Anyways keep up the great work, Ilove this story and update soon, please!

Yay, a new chapter~
Poor Syazel. I hope things turn out better for him soon and I wish Grimm would stop being such a jerk to him.
I laughed so hard when you added the dramatic music XD
Can't wait for the next chapter~ Mmm, makeup smex. The best kind of smexing out there XDD

I first started reading this story a long time ago, then, admittedly, forgot about it for awhile. I came across it again a few days ago by accident, and read through the entire thing, beginning to end. I have to say, I'm glad that I did. I actually detest m-preg stories, and this is literally the only one I've ever come across that I've enjoyed. You gave a plausible explanation for it, and you've made sure to keep talking about the reason behind it instead of just throwing up something quick and then forgetting about it. You also keep the story interesting with unforeseen plot twists. The sex scenes certainly aren't anything to frown about either. Overall, I really like this story. It got my attention enough for me to spend several hours reading it, and I look forward to seeing the next chapter.