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Nice smexin' ... hmmm ... wonder if Zangetsu is gonna tell Ichigo about the developments with H'Tsu ... or if he will let Ichigo find out after the remerge.

this is a great story! ^^

I get the feeling that Ichigo's separated souls will re-merge into one before Grimmjow gets the chance to be dominant. I'm sure Szayel will be so glad when the souls are all one again so that Ichigo and Zangetsu can (hopefully ... as far as Szayel is concerned) exert some restraint on H'Tsu's treatment of him ... and I'm sure he wouldn't be too resistant to 'mistaking' Ichigo and any conserned care and feeding he might offer. Of course H'Tsu probably wouldn't be happy but Ichigo and Zangetsu would probably do what they could to temper H'Tsu's punishments. Grimmjow probably will be far less than thrilled and will most likely pull mind games at the least on Szayel unless Alpha Ichigo puts a difinitive stop to it somehow.

I wonder if the agony H'Tsu inflicts on Szayel during the forced mating (which H'Tsu chose instead of obliterating Szayel) will encourage Szayel to find a way to reverse the splitting of Ichigo's soul. At least that way the other two less violence prone parts are always in close enough proximity to temper or attempt to control H'Tsu ... even during the mating sessions).

Now that Grimmjow is no longer carrying the egg will his personality revert back and will he become more independent of Ichigo? Will Grimmjow and/or Ichigo be required to stay in close proximity to the egg as birds do or will they be able to leave once their strength returns ... more like frogs and fish ... or is it a conscious choice by the parents once the egg has been laid? How long will it take Grimmjow to get his strength and stamina (and all else) back? ... I'm sure Ichigo is wondering most of this too.

If the three parts of Ichigo's soul stay separated how will this affect each of their relationships with the shinigami? The visords? The few hollows that remain? Each other? Szayel? Grimmjow? Ichigo's friends and family? The egg?

If ichigo has to make the choice to remain fragmented or become one again which would he choose? And would the human have the right to choose for all three of them or would each have to agree to the decision?

Due to the soul separation is Ichigo still aware of H'Tsu's actions or will H'Tsu's dominance over Szayel be a shock? How will Grimmjow feel about the other part of Ichigo's soul dominating the other espada? If the souls re-merge in some way how will each part react to the second domination? Will Grimmjow's egg be safe from Szayel? Will a preggers Szayel be safe from Grimmjow? Will H'Tsu stick around after the fact or leave Szayel to fend for himself and the unborn egg (will Ichigo and/or Zangetsu attempt to make H'Tsu do the honorable thing and take responsibility for his actions in this regard?)? I'm sure you will show us all the drama and throw in even more twists ... can't wait ...

Yo, it's the day after Christmas and all I can say is this is the best present anyone could ask for, too hott guys, Mpreg and torture, you've outdone yourself with pure awesome covered with melted epicness and a cherry of coolness on top.
I eagerly await the rest of your awesomeness!
I'm just gonna reread this a few times until you spit out some more, the beginning is just so weirdly cutely awesome... :D

I wonder if the agony H'Tsu inflicts on Szayel during the forced mating (which H'Tsu chose instead of obliterating Szayel) will encourage Szayel to find a way to reverse the splitting of Ichigo's soul. At least that way the other two less violence prone parts are always in close enough proximity to temper or attempt to control H'Tsu ... even during the mating sessions).

Now that Grimmjow is no longer carrying the egg will his personality revert back and will he become more independent of Ichigo? Will Grimmjow and/or Ichigo be required to stay in close proximity to the egg as birds do or will they be able to leave once their strength returns ... more like frogs and fish ... or is it a conscious choice by the parents once the egg has been laid? How long will it take Grimmjow to get his strength and stamina (and all else) back? ... I'm sure Ichigo is wondering most of this too.

Due to the soul separation is Ichigo still aware of H'Tsu's actions or will H'Tsu's dominance over Szayel be a shock? How will Grimmjow feel about the other part of Ichigo's soul dominating the other espada? If the souls re-merge in some way how will each part react to the second domination? Will Grimmjow's egg be safe from Szayel? Will a preggers Szayel be safe from Grimmjow? Will H'Tsu stick around after the fact or leave Szayel to fend for himself and the unborn egg (will Ichigo and/or Zangetsu attempt to make H'Tsu do the honorable thing and take responsibility for his actions in this regard?)? I'm sure you will show us all the drama and throw in even more twists ... can't wait ...

Happy holidays ... can't wait for the next chapter. Hope the pregnancy is going well.

Hmmm wonderful chappie. Makes one ask...

1. Will the three souls of Ichigo merge together again somehow (either naturally or with Szayel's assistance)

2. How will Ichigo, his various parts, and Grimmjow react to H'tsu getting Szayel pregnant (especially if the souls do re-merge)?

3. Boy or girl?

4. How do they each take to being mommies ... Er daddies ... Uh parents?

Bwahahahaha, I have been laughing SO hard... Thank you for keeping Szay-chan alive... I never before imagined him and Hitsu a pair, but I like it... I bet Hitsu will have a hell of time keeping him XD I think its a really good plot development, I cant wait to read more- Hitsu free (poor worldXD), Zangetsu too and Grimmy´s baby coming... please try updating soon and take care :)
Best wishes
Chi

Beautifully written storyline. Your story is the most captivating and enjoyable of all the Ichi/Grim that I have ever read before. I love the way you kept Grim's character despite him being a Beta. i also love the way you made their interaction sweet but not entirely mushy. ( Grim, blame it on the Hormones, I love you the wayyou are). This is the best Bleach MPreg I have read. Most of the Mpreg I have read usually portrays the "pregnant" one being too hormonal & clingy, which to me don't give Justice to the Original characters.
Yours is really perfect portral of the guys. Love them. * Hugs & Kisses to you for Great Job & more motivation?*
Really hope they can be released frm Syazel's cluthes soon.

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Rose for inspiration!!

Looking forward tp your nezt Chapter. ☆*:.｡. o(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆