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Aww, no problem and you're welcome! I think you're a terrific Bleach ff writer and am always happy to review---when I remember to! ><

I'm somewhat glad "the week" passed quickly and that they're now in HM. Even though you just posted this, I look forward to the next chapter as always! Keep up the great work!

I love this story :) Full of HOT boy love with just the character i love **fangirl sigh** lol an dyou write it SO well my friend xoxo

I absolutely agree 100% that there's no point in "rehashing" his explanations with a bunch of details the readers already (or SHOULD, at least) know. I think the chapter is well written and I especially loved all of Karin's comments. XD The only thing it may have lacked was something on the serious side between Isshin and Grimm.....but there's no reason why all of it had to be put in the same chapter. Maybe you will include something along those lines later. :)

I'll repeat what I said in an earlier review...I'm still thrilled that this story features seme Ichi and uke Grimm (though Grimm hardly qualifies as the usual uke, and thank goodness you've kept him in character!!!) If you'd written this in their "usual" sexual roles, it wouldn't be half as interesting and entertaining as it is. Keep up the GREAT work!!

love it! I specially love your Karin.

Good grief, I tried to review like four times and if this doesn't work I will email you! The captcha HATES me!!!
I really like where this story is heading. As a rule, I do not like mpreg fics. But I think you are handling it very well. My only "complaint" if you could call if that, would be that I think Ichigo would be more.. emotional isn't the right word. Verbal about how he feels about his responsibility. The food thing I know is an problem, but it seems to me, that between instinct and his need to protect and secure his friends and family, it wouldn't really be an issue. but its whatever you think, and I am really enjoying what you are doing. Please keep it up!

Very excited to see the update, can't wait for more :)

I freaking love the depiction of power you have going on here. And feral Ichigo is HOT. <3 I'm definitely looking forward to more of this story. You are such an amzing writer. I mean, I'm reading this as well as Proze of Victory. They have such different dynamics in each of the stories and you just paint the pictures with your words so beautifully. <3

So thank you for writing all of this <3

Aww, it's a terrific and entertaining story and I really hope you don't decide to drop it due to review numbers. That would be a shame. :(

Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read about 'meeting the family'!

I like Grimmjow in this chapter. He's actually kind of excited about finally having offspring.

Ilove this story, so please keep updating:-)
This chappy I actually like the most, Ichi becoming more feral, dominating... maybe he finally accepts his inhuman side. I like that.
And such ending, grimmy finally realizing he's getting what he desires most...its such a sweet feeling , I felt myself smiling.
Its a sweet, sexy and beautiful story you're writing, please let me read more of this:)
best wishes
chikage