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for The Real King

by NovaAlexandria

person Anon
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see how Isshin reacts. great update!
person Severaltimes
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, Ichi/grimm is SUCH a cute pairing. I wish there were more ichi/grimm stories. He makes such a sweet seme and grimm is such a cute and pouty uke. I'm surprised you don't get more reviews when your story is so good, i think some people just love grimm/ichi too much to think of it the other way around /shrugs/. I'm excited for ichi to see his family, i always think Karins reactions to things are so interesting because she is just so chill. I have no idea how Yuzu is going to understand when she doesn't even know ghosts and whatnot exist (at least i'm pretty sure she doesn't, i kind of missed some of the arc before the full-bring arc). I'm pumped for the next installment, keep writing!
person qwerty
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dum dum dum! Interested in seeing how the Dad reacts to Grimmjow! Keep going!
schedule September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohohoho, I love how Grimmjow is planning what he's going to do Ichigo. I hope he actually goes through with his intentions. This story is wonderful.
person SummerTime
schedule September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love bottom grimmjow. I love him so much. Cannon yet also cute. I also love the way you've done top ichigo, i like how caring he is, i also like how is hollow side will rear up and strike though i do feel like his hollow side was a little ooc, but we really only have ichigo's interpretation on his hollows actions, and maybe he's just overly optimistic in his interpretations, though i feel like that is also a little ooc. though i kind of like the ooc-ness because i don't want grimmjow getting abused, i dislike sexual violence :'( so i will take the ooc-ness. Any ways thanks for the update looking forward to the next one. Also i'm kind of hoping ichigo's family takes it well, gah i am worried for his faters reaction to the point that i almost wish ichigo can find away around it, though i doubt that will work with grimmjow living in their house. Also where has his family been? Did i just miss that detail? cause i feel like i've been wondering for a while.
schedule September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another wonderful update! :-)
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great update!
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
finally Grimm was at least a bit willing. I liked that. It's discouraging when he acts like such a princess. I thought that he would be willing even as uke... just to manifest his... will to dominate... (?) I think he should instinctively want Ichigo to fuck him, to feel wanted, to assure his body that his Alfa is not going to leave or something...(?) (or just to make ichi look less selfish because he didn't seem to put up a real Ichigo-style fight with his instincts... he gave up just when he had found an excuse)
ANYWAY... I LOVE THIS STORY! This chapter was great. Thank you for the update.
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
XD Thanks for updating... I love this story, its so much fun to read..
Can´t wait to read more:)
Best wishes
Chi
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I´ve been laughing SO hard XDDDD
Grimmy gets a baby.. and from Ichigo- I love it XD
Please update soon, I need more of this ^___^
Best wishes
Chi