rate_review Reviews

Aww, I can't believe this is over. I guess all good things come to an end. I absolutely enjoyed this fic; it's been one hell of a ride. I liked the way you ended it, especially seeing how Szayel had finally found a proper Alpha. I laughed really hard at the part with H'tsu punishing the two morons who dared to test the rules mostly because it was a bit hypocritical of him considering what a douche he had been in the past. Also, Ichigo threatening Yylfordt with H'tsu was pure win!

Now, I must confess that in general I avoid MPreg fics like they're the plague but I knew I'd end up liking this one since you were writing it.

In conclusion, thank you for writing something that I really enjoyed reading.

I think I've been following this story since chapter 2. Grimmjow and Ichigo are my favorite pairing and it's extremely difficult to find good fanfics with the two of them in reversed roles (to what most authors usually write). You pulled it off brilliantly!

Mpreg is NOT my usual thing, so the fact that I faithfully stayed with this story says a lot for your style of writing. I really did find it to be a very enjoyable story overall.

If I had to nit-pick at anything, it would be the occasional typos. But I will say that at least you are consistent with some of them, lol. The one that jumps to mind the most is every time you use the word 'ridicules'. Your spelling actually IS a word, but incorrect context. In the context that you are always using the word, it's actually spelled 'ridiculous'.

Anyway....thank you once again for such a wonderful story. This one and POV are stories I never get tired of rereading. I'm a bit sad to know there will never be another new update to this story....but all stories must come to an end sometime, even the good ones.

I've been reading this story for so long and it's weird to see it over! great job tho! perfect ending :)

I can't believe it's over! Whyy!? lol It was absolutely enrapturing!

I have loved reading this story from beginning to end and say thank you and that I will probably go back and read it again for good measure. I love happy endings and this certainly is one.

That was a great chapter!!! I adored it and oh no only the epilogue I knew it was coming but still I don't want it to end. Selfish of me I know but it's alright I still get to keep up with Prize of Victory 2 so I'll live. Thank for all the hard work!!!

Thank you for the update!

I'd thoroughly enjoyed it.....n i have a son as well....any helpful tip on an 11th month old for a single parent? But anyways nicely done.....i was so into it that my son had to literally snatched my tablet from me to indicate he was hungry lol. Imma read more of ur work.

I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I'm so excited such great work as always!!! I hope you're doing well!

In response to chapter 42 and 43. I personally loved the chapers and I'm surprised at the negative responses you recieved. I thought it was great that Ichigo saw to help Szyel heal and to help Grimmjow's instincts. I think having ichigo decide to bare their next child is great and shows how much he cares and everything. I do like how Ichigo is still the Alpha as it's amusing and makes sense I had a feeling it would be something like that. I loved the chapters and I love the story you are writing. Thank you so much. I know I haven't reviewed for the last few chapers I just always want to skip to the next one and keep reading although I've been lucky to catch this story when it's in chapter 100 and something. As I wait for chapters in Prize of Victory 2. Another story you and Blackfox are doing wonderfully on thank you so much once again! :)


To those that don't like your story. Then don't read it or respond to it, no one wants to listen to your negativity nor do we care for it. Do your mother a favor and follow her teachings and shut up if you have nothing nice to say. We aren't forcing you to read this story so don't. Grow up and quit being children about this story.