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for The Real King

by NovaAlexandria

person qwerty
schedule May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
!!! It never stops! I how this time they won't let Kurostuchi go. I bet he implanted something in Szayel while he was imprisoned that is causing all the trouble now. Super eager to read what happens next! Good thing Ichi laid his egg now because if he was still carrying, there would be no way he would be able to hunt him down. Great chapter.
person Athrun434
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
that's not fair leaving the story like that. cliffhangers are the worst. thanks for another chapter this story keeps getting better and better cant wait for the next one
person Kath
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
God, I'm starting to believe Kurotsuchi really wants to die. It's just too much, if I were Ichigo the man would be long gone. Poor Ichigo has the patience of an angel! I hope he finds Kurotsuchi and kills him once and for all.
person Kath I.
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Usually I'm way too lazy to review but I just had to tell you I love your story! I just read all 56 chapters in 3 days! Which means I haven't slept much.(Sorry for any mistakes, I'm still learning English). I did like the Grimmjow/Szayel, it was kinda cute. Personally, Kisuke is my favorite character so I'd like him to appear more often but still I get why the arrancars wouldn't like him much!
person Athrun434
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
thanks so much for another brilliant chapter.
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm ashamed I never review, and i'm several chapters behind at this point, but I wanted to leave a review this time because I saw from your response to the reviews that you'd gotten a lot of flack for the Grimm/Szay encounter. Well, I loved it. I saw it coming, was hoping for it to come, and I think it makes a lot of sense. It's great to see Szay healing from his former encounters, and even better to see Grimm being sweet and looking after Szay's pleasure because you can really see how much Ichigo has changed him, and how much Grimm appreciates the way Ichigo treated him. Even though we saw the latter a bit with the Grimm/Ichi, it's different because Ichigo isn't vulnerable and Szay completely is. Anyway, I would be thrilled at this point if you turned this into a threesome, although you already said you won't, because the dynamics are all there. At any rate, I hope you continue to show the relationship b/w Grimm and Szay, even with Ichigo & Grimm staying as the main, mostly monogamous pair, because you let him get hurt enough earlier that he deserves it, and we deserve to see it, and get our own souls healed in the process. This is a truly incredible story, I keep coming back to this site mostly just to read it, and I'm excited to see where you take it in the future. Happy writing!
person jaelle
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, I would like to have an original austrailian desert replica with animals like thorny devils and these cute little marsupials. (And also somebody to clean up :)
Just wanted to let you know that I enjoied the most Unohana and her reaction - I could absolutely see it with my inner eye :)!!!
Am now so excited to read about the new little ones. I picture them as just one or two, more human looking and to make it a bit harder on the parents - they need nappys!!

Looking forward to your new chapter :)
person kyuryu
schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
we have similar taste in pets it seems, though I would suggest domesticated foxes from Russia, not just tame foxes (I know it sounds similar, but it's really a big difference). check out domesticfox dot com, they have the only true domestic foxes. Also, I've always wanted a koi pond too, first thing going in when I get a house.
person madyume
schedule March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i want a large aquarion, sand at the bottom, rocks, some dead grass, were i could hold Grimmjow as my littel pet, and i would love him, pet him, brush his fur, and i would keep him well feed, with his favorit food, bitts of Kurotsuchi meet, fresh cut from the sours. Hi would love the taste and a well feed pet, is a happy pet. And that would make the master happy(that would be me).
person Kristin
schedule March 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter. I was really liking the right of passage obstacle course/game, can't wait to see the cubs finish it. I had a good laugh when they ambushed Grimmjow. I knew something had to happen, and with Ichigo he never does anything in the normal or expected way. I'm just glad that Unohona got there in time so Ichigo's body didn't suffer too much damage. Now I can't wait to see their egg hatch and Szayel's laying. I loved this chapter and am patiently awaiting your next update. This story and POV-all of them- are my favorite stories on here:) Keep up your amazing writing, we all love it!