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for The Real King

by NovaAlexandria

person Athrun434
schedule March 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
that was cool. finally ichigo had his egg. nice and dramatic just like him. cant wait to read what happens next.
person kel
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!!!! can't wait to see what the baby looks like! update soon!!!!
person nani
schedule March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!
I just couldn’t stop reading!
It’s really well written and the plot is fantastic!
Thank you for writing the best story I’ve read so far^^
person jaelle
schedule March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi Nova

i´m a very avid reader of your story - i really like your characters and how the story allways tackes another tack without it seeming to be forced. I check for your update at least every other day :) so feel the love from your readers, please, and continue!!! :D
I can´t wait to find out how many cups ichigo will have and if there is going to be trouble..
person kiriutar
schedule March 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this work of yours from the very first chapter. Every update gives me a smile, and I have truly fallen in love with Cachorro, Hijastro, and Ternero. I adore them. Thank you for your dedication. It really shows how much you invest in your writing. I don't know what I will do when 'The Real King' finally ends, but I can assure you I will read it again and again. I wait with baited breath for the next two cubs.
person Rea Adaire
schedule February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's not that nobody is reading; February is too short.

I like how Karin's section from chapter 52 was finished in 53. I'm hoping for an arrancar to ask for kisses like Jou does in maggiemay's 'K.A.T.S.', but I'll take what I can get.

Could you do a section from the point of view of Harribel, Sun-Sun, or Apachi? I think it would be interesting to read how they see the situation as single females in a pack with pregnant males.
person Athrun434
schedule February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
fantastic. it was so heart warming its nicce they can relax a bit. cant wait to see what happens when its time to lay the eggs. with the way youve written ichigo something has to happen.
schedule February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm not bored with this story at all...just a little shy about leaving reviews. :S I love this story and eagerly await your updates! I only hope they catch Mayuri before he can pull anything else! I love how you've developed the relationships in this story, and am particularly intrigued by the developing relationship between Karin and Yylfordt. I felt so sorry for her when they rescued Szayel and the cubs!
person Yachiru_Kenpachi
schedule February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! :D can't wait for the next chapter!!
person qwerty
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm actually super surprised that Ichigo is letting folks watch over his pack, especially after the kidnapping. Yeah they have nothing to hide but why should they submit to such scrutiny in the first place? It'll be interesting to see what the other pack members have to say.

Good chapter!