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October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You're a genius! I love the alternate worlds you seem to be able to create effortlessly! I look forward to more of this story. Please update soon.
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October 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, there, its a really promising start! I like your writing style and the world you´re creating... Aizen being his usual self, I´m sooo curious how their relationship really is- as in how did he get ichi, how does he feel for him (despite Ichi being his property- ok knowing Aizen he´ll never show his true emotions...still I´m really curious how they interact in your story). I think it´s a perfect role for Aizen, bad bad crime lord XD... also the way you portray Ichi and Grimmy- sweet. I love how Grimmy cares for him. Its a really good start for a long deep twisted evil story... or a long deep sweet story- however you like;)
Thank you for sharing it- and please keep updating, I wanna read more:)
Best Wishes
Chi
PS: Sorry for mistakes, I´m no native speaker
Thank you for sharing it- and please keep updating, I wanna read more:)
Best Wishes
Chi
PS: Sorry for mistakes, I´m no native speaker
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October 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! A new story and as always - it's just amazing. That Walled City must be more suffocating than Las Noches ever was.
Good job for starting this interesting plot, can't wait for the next chapter!
Good job for starting this interesting plot, can't wait for the next chapter!
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October 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
as with everything you write, this one is quite good and pulls the reader into the story immediately, even when we don't really know what's going on yet. I can tell already it's going to be awesome! I eagerly await your every update
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October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's just so hard to choose!! I want all of them! I think Sex and Football in Spain with Ginjo and Tsukui would be fun, I love Ginjo's hair style and outfit with the skeleton theme. I think Tsuki is like Ulq so it would be more fun to see how Grimmie react. If you're out of steam for a while, I wouldn't mind the KenShu one, they are my number two favorite right after Grim and Ichi!!
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October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is great; I've been reading a lot of your stories very recently, and it just amazes me how versatile your writing style and genres are! You have a sort of creativity that is really refreshing, and I can't wait to see what happens next, both in this story and in the others you will write in the future! Keep up the amazing, amazing work! :)