rate_review Reviews

I love this story already. I only wish that somehow there was some Byakuya and Renji action (because they are my favorite) but this it great too. I look forward to Renji being with Rikichi and Yoruichi. Never see the latter. I kind of identify with Yoruichi sexually. I don't think of myself as bi, straight but when I watch porn I can imagine myself being able to be with a woman. I also do not think of other women in a romantic way only sexually.. when I'm in the kind of mood. Personal.. but I thought to admit it to you because it's great you thought to write a character who is like that. Ichigo and Urahara I kind of like this pairing also. Ichigo is very cute here and Urahara he's perfect.. I look forward to more.

I must also say you're an amazing and talented writer and one of my favorites. Definitely top 5 or top 3 writers here on on the web to me. You really know how to deliver. You write great stories and the sex in them very hot.

This was completely wonderful. I loved the role Urahara played!!! As soon as you had him speaking outside the bar, I knew you'd put him in that role. He can be a complete sleaze without batting an eye, or losing his innocent smile! I love what you have going on lately. I look forward to your updates always!

This was quite good; I really enjoyed how raw and real both boys' angst over their sexual labels was. It was so normal; one of my favorite things about the stories of yours I've read is that the way you write characters is really dynamic and true-to-life. And, oh, the smut was absolutely nosebleed-worthy! ;D

Great first chapter. I don't usually read totally au stories but this one caught my eye. Pervy Kisuke is always a good thing!

WOW! This fic is so erotic! HAHAHA It's such a nice change of pace! The guys being straight and a little bit curious! Ichigo's adorable!!! So squeamish! Urahara is portrayed rather well as a pervert :D The het sex scene was equally hot! Rukia's what i imagined her to be and all, a typical girl who doesn't go straight to sex! I do hope nothing bad would happen from their unsafe sex! Though if there is an 'accident', it would quite a good plot twist and a lesson to readers of the realities of life. However, I was just wondering, isn't it "salaryman" instead of "salarimen"? And shouldn't Urahara call Renji, "Akira" when telling "Hiroshi" to to pull up his thighs? But this mistake could be dubbed over right? Hahaha just a random thought! :D I really like where this fic seems to be going! I do hope Ichigo will take up on Urahara's offer!

Quite a juicy plot! It's rare to actually see 'bi-fics' that integrate some het with yaoi (believe me, I've tried it on another fandom and people seem to like it as much as het and yaoi, so I know that this fic will be an instant hit for both yaoi and het fans.) Ohhh... I can't wait to see what will happen next! Reading your a/n at the end... Is there going to be some drama in this too? (another plus *grins*). Hope to see more soon!

You are so right about your last AN. Even anal isn't a sure fire way to stop pregnancy. Anyways, I loved it, not too fast not too slow, just right. When I read the summary I was so excited knowing you had written this. Can't wait for more!

Ah... I generally approve of this whole thing. I'd reckon you're spot on with the attitudes.

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