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for Lost in Translation

by mizperceived

person Polymer
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I thought the way you handled Isshin's dialogue was very authentic. He's a real sweetheart and goofball here. Great balance. And your Ryuuken is perfect and contrasts beautifully. I happen to love IsshinxRyuuken fics too and was happy to see this one.
schedule November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha! XD. Loved it. I mostly see Ryuuken as a big fucking asshole, but this works as well. It would be awesome with a sequel! How Isshin will annoy Ryuuken into flipping out and then there will be sexy-time (yes, that is most definitely possible, don't destroy my happy yaoi-illusions!!)
person Femisis
schedule November 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh... my god... I am anticipating quite a bit of chaos. XDDD I nearly peed myself laughing just from the description. I can't just imagine Ichigo replying to Isshin's taunt with "Screw you, I've been sleeping with Uryuu for months!" Or maybe that's just my fangirl mind being dirty again, lol. In any case, PLEASE update this soon, I need more lulz.