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for Shinigami Women's Secret Society

by KelliDenise

person JOler
schedule December 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hope I gave you enough pairing suggestions to get at least a few of them written.

By the way ... I view Hanataro as a 'late bloomer' type who is in his late teens/early twenties but who hasn't really hit his final growth spurt and started bulking out ... besides look at Rukia ... she is several hundred years old so he probably is too ... therefore it isn't shota in any way.

Was just trying to suggest a few hot guys who are usually overlooked for action ... of course you could always make strips with all the guys ... and strips with all the girls ... then pull out one of each randomly if you get stuck (just note which are 'standard' pairings and which have already been done so they don't get repeated ... for a while).
person JOler
schedule December 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Happy holidays ... can't wait for the next chapter.
person JOler
schedule December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please let something happen so some of the papers get stuck together ... Please?

Nelliel coming between Byakuya and Yumichika.

Or maybe ...

An Ikakku, Orahime, Renji sandwich.

Or (whimpers of anticipation) both (two separate chapters of course).

if it must be a one on one ... Hantaro (think that's the small shy guy from the fourth) and Unohanna.

(Of course if they managed to capture, heal, and seal the riatsu of some of the hunkier espada ... that would definitely increase the pairing potential.)
person Codrynae
schedule December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh oh o_O That I did not expect
I was about to say Orihime at the beginning and then I’ve realized it must be a captain, due to the respect shown by Matsumoto respectively Yoruichi. But Unohana … never. Now that I reread it, the woman’s identity makes perfect sense, but I’m not known for my brightness either, so I have an excuse.
Why was Ururu so happy to meet Rangiku … *confused face* Guess I’ll find out later.

You are the goddess that makes crack look like cannon. And let’s be honest RetsuxZaraki is not cannon (relatively at what you said in your author note)

2 bad Zaraki would never know who the mysterious woman was *le sigh* Or maybe he would since she did say that thing at the end "I'm sorry I can't stay to heal your wounds, but I'm sure you'll survive."
person JOler
schedule December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Would love to see poor Urahara get his share of action too ... With several 'random' drawings of his name by ... Orahime, Rukia, Nelliel, Rangeku, and Unohanna ... Love him with SoiFon and Yoroichi too but they are fairly common pairings.

(others I'd love to see whimpering and ducking for cover every time they thought they detected a female presence ... Byakuya, Yumichika, Hanataro)
person JOler
schedule December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to see any (read all) of the following mixed and matched ...

Orahime, Rangeku, and/or Nel with Szayel, Byakuya, and/or Nnoitra

Another mix and match set I'd love to see is ...

SoiFon, Yuroichi, and/or Isane with Starrk, Grimmjow, and/or Ukitake

sigh ... Have to leave out standard or semi-standard pairings though ... Of course seeing Yourichi 'getting a rise' out of Byakuya and giving him a bit more than a hand in dealing with the 'hard issues that come' from the encounter could be interesting ... lol
person JOler
schedule December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok ... One more request ... Sorta tag-team on Yumichika, Urahara, and Hantaro ... have their names drawn several times back to back ... Rangeku, Youroichi, Isane, Rukia, Nelliel, Orahime, and SoiFon ... Just to see how long before they get together and start agreeing that they feel like they are just being passed around like community bedwarmers ...
person Codrynae
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nooo you are not crazy for … wait a second … did you just, indirectly, make me crazy ^_^? Bingo!

Oh oh… Kukaku and Yumichika ... let the show being.
That’s what I love about this fanfic. You choose the most unexpected persons and make them interact with each other without being OOC or impossible.
Can I be jealous … I mean it’s Grimmjow *dreamy eyes* Okay stopping with the fangirl moment.

Nice chapter :)

Btw this part was the best !!!
<<"You know, Lady Shiba," he said. "While it was very polite of you to offer your assistance, we now have a larger problem on our hands. I'm not sure, but I don't think it would be proper etiquette for me to let you be in here…and not fuck the living daylights out of you."

Kukaku's jaw was on the floor.>>



schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovin' it! Keep it up, I can't wait to see who you pick next! :)
<3 Bast
schedule November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this! It's funny and cute, with lots of entendre. I could see it going on forever, and still enjoying each chapter. Update soon, you're doing a great job! I wonder who's next...? If it were me, I think I'd have Orihime interview Zaraki!