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February 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM
loving the story so far, anxious to see where soifon and ichi's relationship goes, as well as how he handles the whole ordeal.
like your AN at the end of chap 3 i agree it was a litle fast, but you could have added in more reactions to the other adjusting to ichigo of all people succeeding jii-san
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July 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this just keeps getting better and better, nice work.
I like how you are building things up like this and giving to those who read time to wonder what will happen next.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
I like how you are building things up like this and giving to those who read time to wonder what will happen next.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading chapter 3. Another excellent chapter, and good work in laying more foundation for future events.
The time-skipping part is understandable, and its good to see things progressing at a good pace.
I'm eagerly awaiting for what happens next, and how Ichigo will handle his new duty, despite not being fully ready for it... but then again, that is the story of his life, isn't it? Heheheh.
The time-skipping part is understandable, and its good to see things progressing at a good pace.
I'm eagerly awaiting for what happens next, and how Ichigo will handle his new duty, despite not being fully ready for it... but then again, that is the story of his life, isn't it? Heheheh.
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June 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a very promising fic, I really liked the first chapter and how it set things up for future events.
The second chapter was very good as well, but also left me feeling a bit confused as well: Mostly due to the attraction between Ichigo and Sui-Feng just suddenly being there out of the blue.
I like this pairing, make no mistake about it, but for this level of attraction to suddenly just... exist, without build up or any hints of where it might have come from, left me a bit confused, considering the personalities of these two characters. If they are intentionally OOC, then I can accept it, otherwise some more build up or exposition would fix it nicely.
But besides that, I like your style and how your writing makes it easy to see in my head what is happening. Hope to read chapter 3 soon!
The second chapter was very good as well, but also left me feeling a bit confused as well: Mostly due to the attraction between Ichigo and Sui-Feng just suddenly being there out of the blue.
I like this pairing, make no mistake about it, but for this level of attraction to suddenly just... exist, without build up or any hints of where it might have come from, left me a bit confused, considering the personalities of these two characters. If they are intentionally OOC, then I can accept it, otherwise some more build up or exposition would fix it nicely.
But besides that, I like your style and how your writing makes it easy to see in my head what is happening. Hope to read chapter 3 soon!