rate_review Reviews

AHHH! MORE PLEZ!!!!!!

I've enjoyed this story so far. I hope you'll get back to writing more. I don't know if you're comfortable with sex scenes as I noticed a perfect opportunity was passed over when Grimm was calming Ichigo down the night before the meeting. One minute they're kissing and embracing and the next Ichigo is more placid as he goes to pick up his babies. Perhaps you're not explicit because you originally wrote this on FF.com but you could take advantage of this site and add extra content which the readers are expecting. Otherwise, your writing is good and the story is interesting. Please continue and update.

fantastic!!!!! i love this update soon!!!!!