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for Breath Apart

by BookMaggot

schedule July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Eeee, I love this and I definitely want to see more! :) Shunsui/Juushiro is my favorite pairing at the moment... well, aside from Shunsui/Starrk or a threesome with those guys. XD So hot.
person Vyper
schedule April 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story! I so want to read what happens next! It is driving me mad!
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is just so adorable X3 I can't wait to know what happens next... can I hope for a fast update or should I come back next year? =P
person Anna
schedule August 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is a perfect mix of despair and friendship and sorrow. Please update soon!
schedule August 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! I have been waiting sooooo long for this chapter. I think you did well on representing Shunsui. In such a situation anyone would feel the vast array of emotions you described. Even someone as carefree as Shunsui would become emotional. I could easily picture him, all these feelings churning within him like a violent whirlpool, a slight frown on his face, the only outward appearance of emotion. The feelings he experienced in this chapter makes him more human, it makes his character more lovable.
I pray for a speedy update, but will wait patiently none the less. :)
Thank you for coming back to this story.
person Raymy
schedule February 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Don't tell me this is over. Don't tell me, please. *puts fingers in ears, hums very loudly*
First impression. Gods. I love inner turmoil, misunderstandings, and the potential for growth. That's why this can't be over. You've covered the first two nicely, but all we're left with is potential. No actual growth. Oh, BTW, thanks for making Ukitake's eyes green. I'm in your camp. So, I want to know more about this stupid hollow and the drug Shunsui was on. But mostly, I want Shun to find out Ju's secret. Now, there's some turmoil. Would he think his friend is a sick puppy? (no pun intended) Or is he feeling that this was not the way he wanted to finally express his lust for his friend. Eh, eh? I know you have the answers lurking in that creative little head of yours.
schedule December 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really have enjoyed this story. Will there be more? Please don't leave it like this, with the two of them in so much pain.
person ohyeah
schedule November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh I would love to see where this is going. I can't wait for this one. Awesome job!
person Roisin Ichimaru
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Are you going to do more with it? I really would like ta know what happens next ^-^
person satterb
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you've written so far. Please keep up the good work. I look forward to more.