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This is a truly lovely story! I like to review each chap but this story just kept making me hungry for the next one and I couldn't wait lol The whole thing was marvelous, and as a yaoi authoress myself, I understand the craving for reviews ;)

Beautiful, and I think I saw a note saying this was your first? Bravo

That was an awesome story. I wish there was more.

An interesting contrast of character for Captain Byakuya Kuchiki. I could see him needing a change of pace and I like the idea of his choice in dancing. I can see how it would be a forbidden pleasure to cut loose for someone like himself. I could not picture who the characters were until Byakuya told Renji to call him by name. Then everything began to click. I'll admit that I saw him in his uniform once my mind reflected back upon his dancing. Perhaps if Renji had thought about how Byakuya was dressed I would not have gotten that specific image of his Captain's uniform. Overall, I like the way Renji was reacting and thinking. Time to read the next chapter. Keep writing.

I have been pleased to see the intimacy angle that this story has mixed into the sex. Few writers include the emotional give and take that you have provided. Such intimacy makes the reading more enjoyable. Thanks for that addition.

Shaking my head over Renji's bad case of foot in mouth syndrome. It fits his personality quite well. I can see how he would be a player as I read the chapter and his various exploits. I even chuckled in a couple of places. Thanks for the entertaining reading.

I had planned to write a review for each chapter… but I failed miserably. I started reading the second one, waiting for the ‘party’ to start but you cut the chapter when they were going to the shower! I couldn’t pause and ran to the next one. And when I realized, I had read until chapter 5!!
Your descriptions of Renji and Byakuya are so cute that I think I’m going to read the next chapters right away.
I especially like the way you change between their respective POV. It’s interesting to see both sides of the story. It looks like they had found a partner for more than a random night.

Now the image of a damn hot Captain Kuchiki dancing in the dance floor has been permanently imprinted in my head! And Renji just drooling and thinking about joining? And the part where they were talking it’s really fun. I can perfectly imagine Renji’s face all red with embarrassment. I’m dying to know what’s going to happen in the hotel!

I ran across a review you posted in someone's story and decided to check you out. Dear lord, you can write. I'm in aw of the way you portrayed Renji and Baya. I loved the way Baya used dancing as a release from his stressful life. I also agree that Ichigo, though sensual in his own right, was not the perfect fit for this wonderful story. The hotel scene was hot, steamy and well written. I almost cried during the fight after as Renji ran away in pain and Baya stood there reaching out to him. (sniffle) I like that Jushiro was so calm and understanding in the way he helped Baya to understand his role in the fight, and Hisagi? What can I say, perversion fits him. ;)
That just leaves us with the last chapter. Hot, Hot, Hot!! I really like it when Renji is on bottom. Don't get me wrong, Baya is sexy as hell while spread out for Renji, but Renji has a sensual 'Take Me' vibe that can take over any scene. Mmmmmm..(clears throat) sorry got lost in a daydream.
I will be looking through your other writings after this, and going through your favorites list. Thank you very much for posting this story. :)

Not A BAD STORY... Thanks for this one :-)

loved this story!! my fav bleach pairing! i wouldn't have minded if it were longer but for a shorter multi chapter it went just how i like my Bya/Ren fics to go! so hot but still with a plot, switching, a little angst & a happy ending = perfect! lol you should definitely do more! (you really should try that juu, ren, bya-kun oneshot ;) maybe as a dream of renji's or something lol) & some ikkaku/yumi!