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I'd love an "Oops special" all about the triplets conception, the "oh shit"/"you bastard" conversation after, the pregnantcy, and hatching

Please don't let this be the only spinoff of "The Real King". I would love to read about Cachorro and his sister when they go and start their own packs, Halibel and Szayel life together and their cubs, Karin and Yylfordt life and the life of their cubs, and the lives of all the other pack members and all the cubs. I wouldn't even care if there wasn't any smut in the stories, but it would be nice.

So please continue writing

Great story :)

I also wanna know when your gonna put up a 2nd part to Prize of Victory?

Really anticipating that!!

reading about everyone opening their gifts was so heartwarming. love it

Honestly, even though there were a couple of spelling mistakes, I don't want to leave a review that points out spelling. I know that it has to do with wanting to get the story out, not having another pair of eyes to proofread and not being able to see those minor slips when doing your own rereading. I think if you want someone to point that stuff out, it should be done in a PM, and the review page should be for a critique of the story. I could probably PM you at FF.net if you really want to know which words I thought needed adjusting. Otherwise, I know nothing of Japanese culture to know of any technical errors regarding traditions. I found the rituals and events you portrayed to be very Western, and felt quite comfortable with them. I've had many large Christmas gatherings, 21 people being average, and trees with mountains of presents spread from one wall to the other. Two dining tables, sometimes three, and a concert of singing, skits and whatever could be thought up, played out on Christmas Eve. Reading about Ichigo's family/pack/friends experience brought back fond memories. The only thing different was mind-blowing sex under the tree. Never had that and it made your story so much better than my remembrances. I was thrilled when you came out with the first chapter so soon after promising to make this extra story and then even more excited that you would serialize it for the 3 weeks leading to Christmas. It's such good marketing, and I don't think you were trying for that, but it really works. It's helping me get into the spirit while rewarding me with that naughty aspect I don't normally associate with the season. Thank you so much for taking the time to put this together and if I don't have time to leave a review for your last chapter, Hope you and your family have a Wonderful Christmas.

Awww, what a cute story for the holiday season! Thanks for writing it!

I have to add how relieved I was after reading the A/N (more chapters). I was going to be really sad if we weren't going to see Christmas Eve/Day! lol

As with all your stories, I look forward to reading the rest!

I love this so muchhhhh, I was so sad when in THK you said that you wouldn't be uploading anything for a month but I'm glad that I was desided to keep checking for updates ^-^
Love your work please countinue the awesomeness :D