rate_review Reviews

I don't normally read AU fiction but after starting reading this one I found it difficult to stop!! I liked the way everyone was included in the end and how there were references to the series but it still worked as its own world. The style you use to write with is captivating, I loved it ^~^

I'm really pleased with this one. It's been so long since I read anything of yours that I didn't recognize the pen name but I thought I'd give it a try. Well, within a few minutes of reading, I knew I'd like it and it just got better. I was getting kinda excited when Ichigo was getting fired up about showing his flair behind the bar with Grimmjow. I'm also very happy about the length of this chapter. I know you said only a two shot, but given how long chapter one is, and if chap 2 is similar, then it feels more like 6 chapters. I'm so glad I took a chance to check this out. And then when I read at the end in your author notes about updating Verloren, I clicked the link to your name and suddenly remembered reading your other stuff. I definitely liked Lithium Lover and reread it. I didn't review at the time but I'll go back add my comments, yet. So, I'm very happy and grateful that you're back in the game and hope you stay awhile cuz your writing is really good.

Great story, there was just a few minor grammar issues you need to fix. Other wise, damn good story!