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March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really liked 'Prize of Victory' but all in all, this feels like a way too long filler arc for me. Your writing style is great, there are no mistakes and you describe things very vividly. But the content just wasn't appealing to me.
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November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That brought about so many feels. Ugh, I can't even begin to fathom the multitude of emotions that this story brought out of me. I feel a bit drained. Very well plotted.
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August 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was totally awesome! I loved catching up with Renji and Nel. They are so cute. You did so great writing this! I love it and I'm sorry haven't reviewed every chapter but I've loved every single one! Thank you and Nova for writing this bleach story I love it.
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August 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!! Renji & Nel are perfect together. I especially like Renji's wet dreams about Nel. And knowing about Ichigo & Rukia is great! Especially knowing the time frame that Price of Victory 2 is going to span, knowing that Ichigo & Rukia are together gives me ideas on what might trigger the Escapees proceeding with their rescue.
Renji's inner world, with the sand and the meadow grass, is brilliant! Especially Zabimaru taking naps there, eating mangos.
Renji's inner world, with the sand and the meadow grass, is brilliant! Especially Zabimaru taking naps there, eating mangos.
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February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've just started your part of the gap between Prize of Victory 1 and 2. I can't wait to read the other chapters! You play a great Renji! I'm looking forward to finishing what you've written. Keep up the great work! You and Alexandra write so well! Thank you for all your hard work!
-Avi
-Avi
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January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
An excellent arc, my friend, excellent! And as to who wanted the Quincy weapons, was that Kisuke? Or is Kurotsuchi still alive? Ah, well, I'm sure I'll find out in POV2. Until next fic, then. Laters.
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January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay, until I glanced over Kain's last review, I didn't even realize you'd lifted two manga only(until Bleach gets a "Final Act" treatment) characters for the ones attempting to grab Vindula, probably because they came and went so relatively quickly so far back. Kudos!
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January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Just Wow!! I managed to read all 11 chapters in one sitting and all I can say is amazing. I don't know how you and Nova have made me fall in love and care about characters I never would have before in combinations I never would have put together!! But you have, I Love Renji and Nel this was a wonderfully told story and I really hope I see more of them and your writing in the future! Well done and thank you for sharing the gift of your writing!
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January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
To piggyback off of my last review, the names Luders and Asguiaro just sunk in as those 2 Quincy/Arrancar hybrids that have shown up in the latest arc lol. I can't believe i didn't immediately catch that, Very nice.
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January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter, but this exchange really stood out to me and had me rolling:
“Fine. Thanks for the advice.”
“Whatever. It’s more of a warning.”
“I’ll keep that in mind.”
‘Good.”
“You’re stalling.”
“I’m trying to come up with a decent story.”
“Any luck?”
“No. Fuck…”
“Let me guess. She’s coming this way.”
“Yeah.”
“Been nice fighting with you.”
“Likewise…”
If only the other Arrancar were more like Grimmjow,starrk and Harribel. Those 3 at least treat the ones they have claimed with some dignity and even outright love in Grimmjow's place.
“Fine. Thanks for the advice.”
“Whatever. It’s more of a warning.”
“I’ll keep that in mind.”
‘Good.”
“You’re stalling.”
“I’m trying to come up with a decent story.”
“Any luck?”
“No. Fuck…”
“Let me guess. She’s coming this way.”
“Yeah.”
“Been nice fighting with you.”
“Likewise…”
If only the other Arrancar were more like Grimmjow,starrk and Harribel. Those 3 at least treat the ones they have claimed with some dignity and even outright love in Grimmjow's place.