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Chapter 8: Brilliant as always and could the intruder perhaps be a member of the Vandenreich? That is if you or the main story author intend to bring them into this. Kudos to Renji for managing to save the day somewhat and show that he is smarter than people give him credit for. And this line about Nel had me cracking up,

"tempest-in-a-D-cup"

lol.

chapter 9:....ouch.....ouches all around.The feels were crushed in this chapter lol.

-applauds and waits for next update-

Holy hell, the feels in this chapter.

(applauds)

Can't wait to see what comes next and sincerely hope you write more stories filling in the time skip gap.

Nice double update. Not a whole lot to say other than i loved both chapters. You continue to impress and hot damn that sex scene was scalding hot although Renji almost screwed the pooch but it is nice to see him get his head on straight and start doing smart espionage. Liked the little back story you gave Nel and it will be interesting if Nnoitra ever catches wind of her survival and current form. I always felt when reading Prize of Victory that he sort of saw Rangiku as a replacement Nel. Especially given their similar...ahem assets and both being strong females. Loved the inclusion of Yumichika and Ggio by the way and it's sweet that they are trying to give Soi some small comforts.

You are on a roll, keep it up.

Nice, very nice start indeed. I greatly enjoyed Prize of Victory despite how soul crushingly depressing it could be at times, especially in regards to some of the less fortunate claimed individuals and the hinted despair of the larger population in soul society, so this story is most welcomed. Renji and Nel's interactions are just adorable and the sex scene was perfect. I have never been a fan of time-skips so i am very glad you are writing a story that fills in some of the gaps. Kudos for the video revelation that showed just how Ishida died and Nemu was claimed, and while i am still not too fond of Szayel(or quite a few of the other more cruel/dickish Arrancar) the video went a long way to somewhat endearing him to me. Liked how we finally got some info on just how much it kills Yuroichi to leave Soi Fon to her fate and speaking of which, is their any chance after you do this RenjixNel story that you will write others detailing what some of the other less read about claimed individuals did during the original story? It's just that Beyond Karin's little cliq of claimed people and a few others we still only have little tidbits here and there of how the greater population is dealing with being claimed and it was outright stated that when things first started their was a staggering number of rapes and murders and by the end of the first part of Prize of Victory we are told that some still suffer under their Arrancar masters even after a decade. As a stated before i greatly enjoyed the first part and i am sure i will enjoy this story as well, I am just very curious as to what the other less spotlighted characters are thinking and going through. We also never really got a followup to the whole "who is Ggio trying to court" sub plot and it was teased that it was Soi. Regardless of what route you take I intend on reading this to the end and I hope you did not take offense to anything i typed in this review.

-waits patiently for update-

Hi BlackFox!

Hi ho hum I hope this finds you in wonderful spirits and I have to say I'm a big fan of your writing, but the one I'm a fan of Toshio/Halbei could you do something similar like your doing now, with approval of course from the NovaAlexandra. I felt that you carried the character with integrate consideration of the character and there growth. But I just felt that you captured the essense that was the character themseslves. *Humbling bows* please consider it.

Tori