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for Prize of Victory 2

by NovaAlexandria

person Ash31
schedule August 15, 2020 at 12:00 AM

How could you!?! I'm crying soi fon may have been a witch at times but *slumped shoulders* she didn't deserve to die.

person Ash31
schedule August 13, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Marechiyo never called her just soi fon, so im guessing omaeda  marenoshin

person Ash31
schedule August 13, 2020 at 12:00 AM

*brandishing spiked spear*

person Ash31
schedule August 12, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I  am in love. Im guessing by you saying nel isnt the only one pregnant that means rukia is too?

person Ash31
schedule August 2, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Did yammybaka say he couldnt teach or spend time with ajuga? I mean for her to be that upset...

person Ash31
schedule August 1, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Love your story still. Id love byakuya's zanpakuto

person Karhein
schedule August 21, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Hey just finished your storry and it was realy amazing. I loves how you brought it to an end, even if it hit me realy hard that soi fon Bad to die... she was always one off my favorits in Bleach. Funny thing btw I ve read "Cradles in the Sand" like a year ago and it took me more than half of POV1 to realize that you also whrote that xD

Ahh well Kind oft sad that the storry is over, but if I am lucky I may geht some more of Cradles xD

Max

person Karhein
schedule August 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Oh boy just read chapter 80 and I realy Mike wäre the storry is going... Almost a shame that these are less than 30 chapters left xD

person Karhein
schedule August 12, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Oh boy I love your storrys, just read prize oft Victory 1 and 1.5 and now here I am. Dont know if you still read the reviews but if yes, IDK what to say, I just spent four days on my Smartphone xD I realy love your storrys xD. 

person gollumsfriend
schedule December 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just rereading this again and noticed for the first time...in chapter 6 you mention Karin sitting next to Grimmjow and slipping into jinzen, the technique he taught her so long ago. For the paragraph to make sense, she'd have to be sitting next to Ukitake since he's the one who taught her.