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for Prize of Victory 2

by NovaAlexandria

person Nikimo101
schedule November 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow...was not expecting that. Very sad, but can't have the final battle be all victories and no losses. Makes it more "realistic". Still sucks though haha
person Arridu
schedule November 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Honestly I want to be annoyed at Soi Fon's death, but you had her go out in such a badass way that between that and how well executed it all was I find myself unable to really muster much anger, that said I really hope that bunker is built to withstand some heavy duty flames cause I imagine not everyone will take it so well.
person Penryck
schedule November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm too fucking shaken up to respond properly so expect my real review on FF tomorrow probably. But at least I have both my POV inspired tattoo designs now. I will get them inked on me as soon as I can afford it.
person Anon
schedule November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It makes me sad that she died, but I understand where you're coming from. It wouldn't have seemed realistic for them to win without any casualties. At least she took down the bastard...
schedule November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
*cries* NUUUUU! Oh, Soi Fon, nuuu! :C

Great chapter, now I must scramble to find some tissues xD
person Kain
schedule November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well.......I hope you are proud of yourself........you just made a grown man cry.

I liked Hiyori.....I LOVED Soi.

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Oh man.....that was both parts epic and tearjerker. Given all of the hell she has had to endure I thought you were setting her up too have her happily ever after....but NOPE, just tears. She had so much too live for, more so than say, byakuya, and never truly got to have any time with her daughter.........and oh god Yuroichi is going to be broken when she finds out what happened to her 'little bee'. She went out like a shinigami and was free but still. She was one of my favorite side characters in this fic and I am sad too see her go but she was at least able to claim revenge.

Now Hiyori is someone else who I also did NOT expect to bite it, only because it felt like there was still things left unresolved between her and Hana and her and Harribel and her part in helping decipher kisukes notes. I liked that she didn't sugarcoat anything and was a character I could get behind because she was pissed at all the right people but it kills me that she never got any resolution with them. It seemed that her purpose was also to be the scrappy thoughout the story, even her own allies got irritated with her and any sentence with mention of her had something bad(although true at times) about her. Her death also felt very pitiful and now she will be known as "that idiot who got Soi killed". Definitely shocked and surprised but felt that there could have been more done with her.

Now while I applaud you on the soul crushing swerves this chapter.....I must warn you than I am about to unleash the entirety of my armada upon your bunker. I still respect the hell out of you but some evils cannot be allowed to stand. My vanguard should arrive within the hour.

Requiescat in pace..........you evil evil writer you.

.....BUT if you do happen to survive the hell storm coming your way

-Will wait patiently for next chapter where hopefully a bug will be stomped to ease the pain-







person whiteShadow
schedule November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
HUHUHUHU...:(
Goodbye Soi fon...I really did like her,and I felt sorry for Ggio and to their daughter.
This is a very,very sad chapter.
person Aviary
schedule November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 96
Another lovely chapter!!! And I can't wait to read the next one!
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 97
I have to say that using Yuzu was fabulous!!! I was shocked to see it as I thought it might have been Ishida's dad but I love that twist a lot and I think it was great! Yuzu killed Aizen she's such a badass and it's great to see Yammie is dead!!! And I can't wait to see what happens with finding Barran and Ggio and what will happen with Rangiku and Takaski I wonder if Gin will find her and everything since he's disappeared I hope he gets to help take out Noritora!! I'm sorry you aren't feeling well and I hope you feel better soon!!!! Don't worry about the delay it's totally okay.
person KyaruZ.
schedule November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow you DID get me with the whole death incurred by Yuzu! AWESOME twist! can hardly wait fer the next chapters!