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for Prize of Victory 2

by NovaAlexandria

person Scorpinac
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes, indeed. It was awesome!! Thank you, Ryuuken, and Good-bye, Aizen! Now, they just need to take out Yammy and Barragan, and that's that. And of course now we'll finally get to see what Ajuga and Diemus are doing. Oh, and you slightly misspelled Deicide, just so you know. Laters.
person Scorpinac
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
And on re-examination of the last few chapters, that's not Ryuuken, it's Yuzu, isn't it?
person Anon
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter! I don't even know how to express my happiness right now. I'm smiling like an idiot and just... I'm damn happy that son of a bitch is finally dead and that Ryuken dealt the final blow. In a way, it's revenge for Uryuu. I loved this chapter, I loved it, loved it. Now I just want to see Yammy die slowly and painfully and I'll throw a party. XD
person Longtime Reader
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Best. Ending. For. Aizen. EVER. Love it love it love it love it!

Hope you feel better soon!
person animeprincess
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I certainly hope you feel better. It was well worth the wait.

 

What a suprise ! I can honestly say that of all of the characters you could have chosen to deliver the final death blow(bolt), I would never have predicted Ishida. Of course, I realized he was leaving the world of the living to somehow further help the escapees, I just didn't anticipate it being in such a major part.

 

The fact that after all of these chapters you continnally surprise your readers is a credit to your ever evolving writing skills.I look forward to reading the remainder of the story. Any chance for a third story in your series detailing the adjustments to living in a post- Aizen world?
Can't blame a gal for asking.

 




person Arridu
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ok that was awesome, I loved how utterly ineffectual Aizen's taunts were against Ichigo, and the way you incorperated his new Bankai and full hollow form was...well almost terrifying were it not ofr him finally being fully aware in that form. And while foreshadowed earlier, the end of the fight still managed to catch me slightly off guard. Main show aside nice job showing Renji and Rukia's growth, both in terms of strength and as people over the last 15 years, in summary excellent chapter, good riddance to the bad rubbish that is Aizen, and onto the loose ends that are Yammy and Barragon, on a nonstory related note sorry to hear your not doing well and hope you get well soon.
person Penryck
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was beginning to really worry about you Nova, and figured that your health was the reason for a late update. Very glad to see that you are still well enough to update but I'm so sorry you aren't doing as well as you probably want to be. Never feel obligated to update on our behalf, your wellbeing always comes first. No one thinks any less of you if they don't get their fix for a week. I'm so grateful that this fic is being seen through to the end, and that is enough. Take time for yourself! Also congrats on over 50 pages of reviews here!

I'm so damn eager to watch Barragan die but not eager at all to watch Soifon fight Ggio. I'm dreading it so much. But it makes sense. You never told us how their fight in the war ended so I guess if they fight now it will make up for that. I want it to be bloody but not fatal. Damn you for making me so conflicted.
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
@Chapter 96: Don't sweat it, delays are inevitable. As to the story, there was a hell of a lot going on during the fight. I'm still curious about the injury Vindula caused Aizen's hand, and the fact that it was effecting him like a corrosive poison on his inisides. I couldn't help but find the man's arrogance amusing, still insulting and trying to trying to manipulate Ichigo and Grimmjow as he's struggling to keep his power level up. But then, it makes sense, manipulation is usually the last vestige of a coward.

It was pretty cool when they managed to literally rip the damn Orb from out of Aizen. Then, Karin picks the thing up and crushes it, and he's still casting impotent threats at everyone! The term "like a cornered rat" perfectly describes what Aizen had been reduced to, as literally everyone showed up to close the noose around his proverbial neck. Though I was thrown off the first time I read the ending, when that blue energy energy obliterated him, and had to back and re-read it to realize that Ryuuken had sniped him with his Quincy powers.

Anyway, great job, can't wait to see what happens next week!
person gollumsfriend
schedule October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM


Sad to see no update this week, but happily spent time rereading chapter 95 again! Have really been enjoying the past few chapters, keep up the great job and hope all is well with you!
person Rei
schedule October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi Nova,

just wanted to say i'm loving you're writing, and can't wait for when you're finally able to post the last chapter(s? *puppy eyes*) of this story. Have been greedily devouring every chapter since I first found you through you're story "The Real King"- i think almost 2 years ago now *lost in thought* lol. I check as often as I'm able depending on if it's around when you normally update and my schedule with my son *chuckles*. Giddy anticipation and at some points mild thrill of dread depending on where you've been as you've updated has become an intoxicating mixture as I follow you're stories. Thank you for the wonderful lives you've created for us readers to follow.