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The Beginning of the End
Another lovely chapter as always!! I greatly enjoyed everyone in it and I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope everything is going well for you and Blackfox! :) keep up the great work!

Enjoying these last chapters immensely.

Oh, yes, I am very much enjoying these chapters, and eagerly look forward to "seeing" Aizen's reaction when he realizes that Kyoka Suigetsu isn't working on Ichigo and Grimmjow anymore, and when the Hogyoku suddenly blips out of existence! But, um, not to nitpick, but when Mareyo first popped up pregnant, I belive you stated her Arrancar wasn't one of the abusive ones. Nice resurrection look for him, by the way. Well, until next week, and either a check in on what Ajuga and Diemus are doing or how Hana and Hachi were doing at the start of the attack, then. Laters.

Tsk,tsk...man,I really hate Yammy.He's ugly and dumb.Hope Byakuya's the one who lacerate and kills him in the end.It's gonna be satisfying!

@Chapter 94-95: Sorry I didn't review last week's chapter, but I was dealing with food poisoning... It was fun to finally see Tatsuki and Rangiku again, and how their pregnancies are progressing. I loved how they differed in some ways, yet were perfectly synced up in others. It's was also interesting to learn more about Tatsuki's upcoming child, and see how little Avispona is getting on. It was cute when Tatsuki deliberately worked herself up into a crying panic in order to summon Tesla via the claim on her.

The following chapter was great. I loved that we finally got some proper character development from Sementall. And for an Arrancar, his relationship with Mareyo is rather normal, all things considered. I loved the idea of his release, and how it casts "Fascination" on people. It was cool that you worked in as many cameos as you did, so we get a chance to see what all the different characters are up to. That being said, I hate to admit that I was actually a little surprised to see that Yammy and Baragon were still finding new ways to abuse poor Bya and Ggio even at this late point in the story (sigh). I can't wait until those two are finally put down for good. And man, the rest of the Kuchiki are such pieces of shit!

Can't wait to read the next chapter, later.

I just want to say I do love this story, it is just so well done like the actual creator of Bleach is writing it, you have expertly captured what the characters would most likely do in every situation you have put fourth and even at time it might be a bit uncomfortable to read,only some parts, I love Prize of Victory and am so glad to have found it.

Please tell me that Yammy and Barragan are gonna die?

Delays

I read this last Wednesday and haven't had a chance to review an it was lovely! I'm excited to see what Tataski and Rangiku get into and everything! Go kenpachi take on Noritora. I hope Rangiku and Gin get to be together finally! I would love to see it and even if Ranguki is having her own kids with Noritora I think Gin could look passed it and everything. I hope your doing well!!! It was fabulous work as always! Thanks for your hard work Nova and Blackfox!

I for one am loving these chapters, I certainly hope your are not over exerting yourself getting these updates out. Sorry for not reviewing in the past while, It astounds me when I put the soapbox away at how much writing inspiration I lose. Although the parts with Mareyo fawning over Sementall had me grinding my teeth for all too obvious reasons and had me itching to dust off my box but I made a promise and will not preach until after the dust has settled with the final battle. As I recall you already have most of these chapters pre-written and I trust your writing ability.

Again Soi fon and byakuya's parts are both my favorite and the ones that hurt the most since they are both characters I adore. I had though we had reached the summit of Mount "Do-Not-Want" but apparently there are still a few more hurdles to get over. Real darkest before the dawn stuff here eh? And that poor girl, first having to live within even 100 feet of barragan and now to be used as a brood mare. Anyone else who had to endure what they have had too(aside from Gin and szayel) would have committed seppeku but these two are holding strong and using there intense hate and desire for payback against their abusers as fuel too keep going.

Now this next part is for DarkStar84:

Damn did you just straight up take my monster review making spark and add it to your own? I remember the days when I could bust out quality reviews like yours lol. I agree that what Karin said kind of came off as dismissive and that has been a bit of my issue with her from this stories onset in that she is dismissive about a few things that deserve a bit more thought and consideration but I digress, she had literally just been raped so her being "all there" would not be likely and that might be why she thought what she thought. Girl has had too deal with a lot and probably has to Compartmentalize quite a bit. I would like to discuss more after the battle is done since I promised not too get into a certain other subject till then.

Another amazing piece Nova, this is one of a kind.

-waits patiently for next chapter-

Talk about an ominous chapter title, man. But it fits very well. Because with them all in place, as well as the others, things might start to truly progress. Really looking forward to that, Nova.

But Glaux now I'm super worried. I keep saying I want a rematch between Soifon and Ggio someday for real in Bleach. But in POV, oh fuck, it will not bode well. You truly have a sinister edge to you. Doing this to the fans. Ha. I'm eager to see how all of it plays out so I can comment upon it for days upon end. Freak out about it at work too, obviously.