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I am enjoying these nights before tomorrow chapters. Is it just going to be the main players or will there be ones featuring the slightly more minor characters, like Appaci and her 'pet',Mila rose and her's? Very interested on how those girls feel being claimed by the fraccion of the 3rd espada and whether or not they have grown to care for them. And if you are sticking to the more focal characters will there be one featuring Ajuga and Diamus?

Soifon's chapter

Another great chapter great work I can't wait for the next ones!!! So wit that little tidbit about how she lost her voice because of Barrigan I think she still has as a little bit or that inside her therefore because he's still alive it can't be restored yet perhaps her voice we come back and be babe to be healed after he's dead.

I like how everything is falling into place great work and everything the part with Shiba was great! And I though the general was funny honestly. You did great work thanks!!

My eyes teared up at points here, not gonna deny that at all. It was painful to read but also...so touching. You've given me a true place for Szayel and Nemu in my heart. I'm so damn glad they have one of the best relationships going. And I'm so hoping that in time he'll recover enough to not lose it while doing his thing. But if he does not, that is okay. You can never force someone to get over trauma and their pain is valid. Thank you Nova, for reminding me why I like this pairing.

Oh, poor Szayel.. :C that flashback he described breaks my heart.

I hope Aizen gets what's coming to him.

@Chapter 85: No... Fucking... Way... Oh my god, Kukaku! I should known the vixen was alive! And she's taking part in the revolt! OMG, I love her character sooo fucking much, thank you sooo much for including her in this story!!!

Awe poor Orihime in curious to know if the reason she can't walk Soifon is that one order he had done with Syzel in part 1 believe about not healing those who had been injured by Kami, maybe it has something do with that or until Barrgan is dead? But I'm curious to know the reason. Silly Uluqurria not realizing that honesty is truly to best way to please Orhime. :) a lovely chapter as always it was good thanks for all your hard work.


To those reviewing I highly recommend Blackfox's side story for Prize of Victory 2 called the Kitsune Wedding!!' It was great!

A Kitsune Wedding:

http://bleach.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600012987

Damn now you have me wondering about how things would have been if Nirgge didn't die. And how it was decided that Ggio would be the one to put the Claim on Soifon. One new element being introduced throws my mind totally off kilter. But thanks for the new food for thought. Ruminating on this hours after reading has made me wish I thought of this when I reviewed on FF. You never fail to capture every ounce of my attentions.

Lol I love that last part. "That man was capable of turning a bolt of harlmess-looking silk into a weapon" and that made me think of using a silk scarf as a whip of sorts.

so.........my net has been down since last Tuesday so I missed all the updates, I have not read anything yet as I am in the process of getting back all the info that was lost when my computer betrayed me so i will do a mass read at some point tonight and review.

Read through the updates.......loved every bit of them. Several things that I have been curious about in past reviews were addressed so I am happy. This review is going to be pretty short since I am still in the process of getting back the crap load of stuff that was lost when my comp died.

-Still despise a majority of the Arrancar(lol sorry, I am a vast ocean of hate when it comes to them). While it is nice that some of them changed the bulk of my hate comes from what they did and the world they helped create, instinct and slow adaptation be damned. Change is good and they have become better, but it does not, in my eyes at least outweigh the evil and cruel deeds they once did.

-The level of loyalty the 12th have for Szyael is actually kind of cute lol.

-I am surprised to find myself pretty stoked about where things go with Starrk and nanao. If there is one hollow that I like 100%, it's gotta be starrk. I like what you did with starrk and lillinette as well, Him having the morality while she has most of the instinct. I also loved how she would have no problems hooking up with Ukitake if she were able.

I want to type more but my review muse has taken a noesdive since the crap with my comp began. Love the story and hope that even after the final battle and clean up that you and black fox continue writing stories about this verse.

Hmm, now I guess I shall check out "Kitsune Wedding".

-waits patiently or the next chapter-