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September 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love that you paired Starkk and Nanao. Those two were sweet.^_^I'm a Starkk fan!
Can't wait for the next update.
Can't wait for the next update.
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August 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ggio!!
Thank you for the update! Keep up the great work!
Thank you for the update! Keep up the great work!
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August 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
@Chapter 81: Wow, you really packed this chapter with a lot of excitement, intrigue, and emotional twists and turns. Before I go on, I just want to say that I hope you start feeling a little better at some point.
Anyway, as to the chapter... First, I was glad that Ggio finally got a chance to speak, though I've realized that him actually being happy is basically an omen of something bad that's about to befall him... And as for Yumichika, man! I'm constantly in awe of him- this guy is clearly made of stern stuff than his frilly, perfumed exterior would have think at first. He selflessly put himself in harms way for others, taking the brunt of Barragon's lechery, and all with a smile, and asks nothing in return. He should be made a saint.
I also enjoyed the bit with Stark and Nanao, how the two of them are fumbling their way through the finer points of this new relationship. It's because of you that I've grown to adore Stark (and Lilinette) as much as I do. It's your take on Stark that inspired me to turn him into a main character in my own story. And poor embarrassed Nanao- I laughed when Yuroichi suggested they get Jushiro involved in a threesome! Anyway, the rapid-fire revelations at the end was exciting. Though I did wonder if having so many powerful being clustered together would be like a beacon in the dark, what with the massive concentration of reiki all scrunched together.
Still, as an acknowledged fan of Orihime, I feel compelled to point out to remind people that while she may be a bit of space cadet at times, she's a much stronger person than she's often given credit for. I mean, this is the woman who looked Ulquiorra squarely in the eyes and slapped him across the face without even flinching. Deep down, she's made of steel.
On a larger note, I'd like to compliment a particular trait that I've observed throughout the entire run of this series. I really love the way you've explored the varying forms of intimacy that people share. I'm not really talking about the obvious form- ie, characters who are lovers, like in the case of GrimmKarin or UlguiHime. Rather, this series has showcased the kind of relationships that are often ignored in storytelling.
For example: Karin and Szayel have a very intimate relationship. After all, she's been with him at his very worst- she's treated his wounds, stitched him up in the shower, and saved him after he slit his wrists. In turn, Szayel has put himself to protect Karin and his family- he's gone through multiple bouts of physical and sexual violence, and never even considered betraying Karin. And this brings me to the relationship that's developed between Renji and Szayel and his family. Renji's been there first hand for some of Szayel's rough times. I guess you could it be argued that you don't truly know another man until you've had to hold him as he cries/bleeds.
Getting back to Yumichika for a moment... The relationship between him and Ggio may have been born out of necessity, but it's clear by now that they're arguably as close as Yumi was with Ikaku. Most TV and films are terrified of showing two men being that close, because they're terrified of the idea that people might think they were gay (rolls eyes). It's the same bullshit as how a man isn't supposed to appear emotionally vulnerable in front of another man. The fact that Yumi instinctively moved to hold Ggio as he's breaking down into sobs shows how much of a better storyteller you are than most of the so-called "professionals" in the industry.
Well, I've said my peace, as it were. So the only thing left now is to reiterate how much I'm enjoying this story and how much you've inspired me to try and become a better storyteller. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
Anyway, as to the chapter... First, I was glad that Ggio finally got a chance to speak, though I've realized that him actually being happy is basically an omen of something bad that's about to befall him... And as for Yumichika, man! I'm constantly in awe of him- this guy is clearly made of stern stuff than his frilly, perfumed exterior would have think at first. He selflessly put himself in harms way for others, taking the brunt of Barragon's lechery, and all with a smile, and asks nothing in return. He should be made a saint.
I also enjoyed the bit with Stark and Nanao, how the two of them are fumbling their way through the finer points of this new relationship. It's because of you that I've grown to adore Stark (and Lilinette) as much as I do. It's your take on Stark that inspired me to turn him into a main character in my own story. And poor embarrassed Nanao- I laughed when Yuroichi suggested they get Jushiro involved in a threesome! Anyway, the rapid-fire revelations at the end was exciting. Though I did wonder if having so many powerful being clustered together would be like a beacon in the dark, what with the massive concentration of reiki all scrunched together.
Still, as an acknowledged fan of Orihime, I feel compelled to point out to remind people that while she may be a bit of space cadet at times, she's a much stronger person than she's often given credit for. I mean, this is the woman who looked Ulquiorra squarely in the eyes and slapped him across the face without even flinching. Deep down, she's made of steel.
On a larger note, I'd like to compliment a particular trait that I've observed throughout the entire run of this series. I really love the way you've explored the varying forms of intimacy that people share. I'm not really talking about the obvious form- ie, characters who are lovers, like in the case of GrimmKarin or UlguiHime. Rather, this series has showcased the kind of relationships that are often ignored in storytelling.
For example: Karin and Szayel have a very intimate relationship. After all, she's been with him at his very worst- she's treated his wounds, stitched him up in the shower, and saved him after he slit his wrists. In turn, Szayel has put himself to protect Karin and his family- he's gone through multiple bouts of physical and sexual violence, and never even considered betraying Karin. And this brings me to the relationship that's developed between Renji and Szayel and his family. Renji's been there first hand for some of Szayel's rough times. I guess you could it be argued that you don't truly know another man until you've had to hold him as he cries/bleeds.
Getting back to Yumichika for a moment... The relationship between him and Ggio may have been born out of necessity, but it's clear by now that they're arguably as close as Yumi was with Ikaku. Most TV and films are terrified of showing two men being that close, because they're terrified of the idea that people might think they were gay (rolls eyes). It's the same bullshit as how a man isn't supposed to appear emotionally vulnerable in front of another man. The fact that Yumi instinctively moved to hold Ggio as he's breaking down into sobs shows how much of a better storyteller you are than most of the so-called "professionals" in the industry.
Well, I've said my peace, as it were. So the only thing left now is to reiterate how much I'm enjoying this story and how much you've inspired me to try and become a better storyteller. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
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August 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
At last, the plan comes together! Though I am curious as to the last two things they need, but I'll wait. And as to your announcement, Congratulations! I sincerely hope all goes well for you this time around. Well, until next week, then. Laters.
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August 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and on Orihime, I feel compelled to remind you that this is the same girl who, not long after being taken hostage by Aizen in Hueco Mundo, decided to use her powers to negate the Hogyoku from existence at the first available opportunity! Sure, she never got the chance actually implement this plan, but she still came up with it, on her own! And never once spoke of it to anyone as she knew damn well there was literally no one in Los Noches she could trust! Just saying.
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August 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another gret chapter!!!! Poor Giglo though oh my god Barrigan better die a horrible horrible death that asshole!!! And stark was so cute to Nano! Loved that part poor Soifon!!! It was so sad but so good and everything I can't wait for the next chapter! And Congratz on having another little one!!! :) I hope your doing well take care of yourself!
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August 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
@DarkStar84
I too enjoy these discussions.
Hmm Aizen......
I would like to believe that he wasn't always a monster. But the fact that he was so vastly superior to everyone around him I think gave him a bit of a god complex, and really, just how long do you have to be so much better at everything than everyone else till you start to see them as lesser beings and yourself as some sort of god. Until Ichigo completed his training in the dangai, the ONLY person who had him beat in raw power was Yamamoto. I actually enjoyed manga/anime aizen to a point because despite having an absolutley broken ability you got the sense he only used it because he was feeling lazy, once he cut loose he showed he was capable of soloing every other captain and taking most of them down in one shot. Another thing about canon Aizen is that we know absolutely jack spit about him aside from some of his time in the gotei before he became a captain. We get no mention of birthplace, whether he died and simply came to the SS or was born there, WHY he is so insanely strong and how he was able to conceal that power for so long. We hardly ever got a revealing pov from him in the manga/anime, hopefully when he decides he is tired of prison and shows up in the final arc we will get some back story.
Now "prize of victory" Aizen is a straight of sociopath, the man believes he has no restrictions in his actions, he is like a toddler throwing his toys around, no one but him matters in his world. Even when we are given pov chapters of him they are absolutely terrifying, for him torture and rape are just another Tuesday. Even when he gets a pet the dog moment it's less about mercy and more about it just being another one of his whims. In this fic I think the "Aizen", who waged war with the SS ceased to exist the second he ascended to the throne and the final veil was lifted and the "Aizen", the sick twisted fuck we have seen since chapter 1, is his true self.
I too enjoy these discussions.
Hmm Aizen......
I would like to believe that he wasn't always a monster. But the fact that he was so vastly superior to everyone around him I think gave him a bit of a god complex, and really, just how long do you have to be so much better at everything than everyone else till you start to see them as lesser beings and yourself as some sort of god. Until Ichigo completed his training in the dangai, the ONLY person who had him beat in raw power was Yamamoto. I actually enjoyed manga/anime aizen to a point because despite having an absolutley broken ability you got the sense he only used it because he was feeling lazy, once he cut loose he showed he was capable of soloing every other captain and taking most of them down in one shot. Another thing about canon Aizen is that we know absolutely jack spit about him aside from some of his time in the gotei before he became a captain. We get no mention of birthplace, whether he died and simply came to the SS or was born there, WHY he is so insanely strong and how he was able to conceal that power for so long. We hardly ever got a revealing pov from him in the manga/anime, hopefully when he decides he is tired of prison and shows up in the final arc we will get some back story.
Now "prize of victory" Aizen is a straight of sociopath, the man believes he has no restrictions in his actions, he is like a toddler throwing his toys around, no one but him matters in his world. Even when we are given pov chapters of him they are absolutely terrifying, for him torture and rape are just another Tuesday. Even when he gets a pet the dog moment it's less about mercy and more about it just being another one of his whims. In this fic I think the "Aizen", who waged war with the SS ceased to exist the second he ascended to the throne and the final veil was lifted and the "Aizen", the sick twisted fuck we have seen since chapter 1, is his true self.
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August 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This Weeks Question: If you had to make a cryptic system for Kisuke to use to hide his research, how would you have gone about it? - Well when I read that there was candy recipe's, I immediantly though of a mod soul recipe that knew all his data and recordings. Idk How that would of gone down as mod souls are often airheaded and one track mind but still.
+ I like your writting style, it makes me hang on every word. I look forward to wednesday's because of this story. I don't usually type down a reveiw, but thats only cause I pop in just to read and don't often do much else on this site. You make me feel for Grimmjow, I think in all every single character who is going through stuff emotional wise- it would be him that I'am most sympathetic with. I know Karin is going through rape, and torment, but to be Grimmjow and feel powerless for the one you love is devastating, to know you couldn't protect them. It hurts! :'(
- I feel like your chapters are getting shorter and shorter! I also feel (not a fan of Kenpachi) that Kenpachi is a bit out of character, but that could just be the affects of the loss the war provided. Zaraki seems to be just a backround character (which is perfectly fine with me), but he also seems to me; is a man who commands attension as such.
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+ I like your writting style, it makes me hang on every word. I look forward to wednesday's because of this story. I don't usually type down a reveiw, but thats only cause I pop in just to read and don't often do much else on this site. You make me feel for Grimmjow, I think in all every single character who is going through stuff emotional wise- it would be him that I'am most sympathetic with. I know Karin is going through rape, and torment, but to be Grimmjow and feel powerless for the one you love is devastating, to know you couldn't protect them. It hurts! :'(
- I feel like your chapters are getting shorter and shorter! I also feel (not a fan of Kenpachi) that Kenpachi is a bit out of character, but that could just be the affects of the loss the war provided. Zaraki seems to be just a backround character (which is perfectly fine with me), but he also seems to me; is a man who commands attension as such.
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August 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
@Kain
Oh, please don't worry, I've actually enjoyed these impromptu discussions we've had. Even when we don't quite agree on certain things, I'm more than able to understand your point of view. And, to be honest, if Diaemus wasn't in the equation, then I'd be perfectly fine with Ulquiorra experiencing a proper karmic bitch-slap over what he's done. It's just that by this point, Ulquiorra is *so* different from how he was when the series began that he's virtually a different person now. NOT that that's an excuse, mind you!
Anyway, I think the only real difference is that I'm more inclined to accept the Arrancar's actions and beliefs, because they're creatures of instinct and their morality is so fundamentally different. To me, the Arrancar are more like animals in some ways, so for me at least it feels like I'm judging sharks or rabbits for not being more empathetic. Though we'll both just have to wait and see how things play out.
I've posed this question before... But what's your take on Aizen? Do you think that Aizen always was the monster that he is now? Because I have to wonder if "Aizen" is just an act, and that the person everyone "knew" never really existed. It's like, for how powerful and intelligent he is, he has NO sense of imagination or creativity... aside from his inherent sadism.
Oh, please don't worry, I've actually enjoyed these impromptu discussions we've had. Even when we don't quite agree on certain things, I'm more than able to understand your point of view. And, to be honest, if Diaemus wasn't in the equation, then I'd be perfectly fine with Ulquiorra experiencing a proper karmic bitch-slap over what he's done. It's just that by this point, Ulquiorra is *so* different from how he was when the series began that he's virtually a different person now. NOT that that's an excuse, mind you!
Anyway, I think the only real difference is that I'm more inclined to accept the Arrancar's actions and beliefs, because they're creatures of instinct and their morality is so fundamentally different. To me, the Arrancar are more like animals in some ways, so for me at least it feels like I'm judging sharks or rabbits for not being more empathetic. Though we'll both just have to wait and see how things play out.
I've posed this question before... But what's your take on Aizen? Do you think that Aizen always was the monster that he is now? Because I have to wonder if "Aizen" is just an act, and that the person everyone "knew" never really existed. It's like, for how powerful and intelligent he is, he has NO sense of imagination or creativity... aside from his inherent sadism.
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August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Glaux, what a good chapter! You have sparked my love of Szayel/Nemu from hot coals to a roaring fire. And I love them both individually even more thanks to you. Thank you Nova, this was so well needed. I want them to have a happy ending almost more than anything. He is trying so hard, too hard at times, and I hope it pays off. They need it to work so good things can follow.
AND I DAMN NEAR DIED AT THE NEXT CHAPTER THING. BEEN WAITING FOR THIS MOMENT FOR MONTHS. WAITING A WEEK IS GONNA BE MY DEATH.
Do you still intend to do daily updates for a week, by the way? This fix has me bowed too lowly to its power. I need. But I know you're not a machine so take all the time you need.
AND I DAMN NEAR DIED AT THE NEXT CHAPTER THING. BEEN WAITING FOR THIS MOMENT FOR MONTHS. WAITING A WEEK IS GONNA BE MY DEATH.
Do you still intend to do daily updates for a week, by the way? This fix has me bowed too lowly to its power. I need. But I know you're not a machine so take all the time you need.