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For next week: Reinstated the 6th with Byakuya at its head? Ohpleaseohpleaseohplease!

I still want Yammy to suffer horribly. Please make him suffer. Like, a LOT!

On this chapter, I only just figured out that *this* Oomaeda is the father, not the son, which makes it easier for me to believe that Soi Fon accepts him so easily. And thank you for sparing us a word-for-word re-enactment of the arguments between Harribel's fraccion.

Somehow I'd gotten confused and thought she'd been taken to Marechiyo, still alive and well, but I guess I just got something mixed up somewhere. Either way, nice to see this conspiracy moving forward, and I'm really glad you addressed the question of whether or not Soi Fon's baby was still going ahead, since I had actually been thinking myself that that wouldn't be necessary now that she's decidedly out of Barragan's reach. But actually this does make sense for the current nonce. Well, until chapter 74, then. Laters.

sorry I forget if you answered this already, but will Soi-Fon get her voice healed back or not?

Okay, lets get to it.

Chapter 68:

An Auction........SURE why not. I mean, they have had to face almost every other strike against there dignity so why not this? Aizen seems to live on Naraku logic-

*Make as many enemies as you possibly fucking can*

Was totally surprises that none of the selected shinigami opted to nope the fuck out of dodge. That shows some real strength. They know whats coming but instead of fleeing they went along with it. I suppose the only silver lining is that the least abusive arrancar were given first "dibs" and that there are now rules against physical abuse, although Yammy showed that it is possible to get around rules like that. Ya know I would love to get into the heads of some of these shinigami, just to see what they think of everyday life for the past 15 years and whewther or not they are simply numb to all the shit they have to put up with.

Now on to this:

While the Third’s fraccion could be irritating, thoughtless, obstinate, argumentative and feather-headed at times, the three were basically good-hearted.

Toshiro, you adorable little grumpy scamp........Dont make me cross the barrier between thiss world and the net and strik you with a brick.

This has probably got to be the thing the vexes me the most as I have stated many(annoyingly so)times, It is understandable that He would not have to harsh of thoughts toward them since they never REALLY abused him but the girls and especially Harribel all had a hand, malicious or not, in helping create the new soul society that he lives in where rape and abuse is commonplace and Auctions get held for his comrades. The fact that one is carrying his kid and all 4 are in agreement in putting Aizen down doesn't clear any slate. Everyone just seems so "OK" with most of the Espada barring yammy and barragan and only seem to hold minor annoyance towards the numeros. It could just be the "hate lenses" I am wearing though.

Alright, Aint gonna lie, having Tatsuki make Tesra pick the terrified 4th division officer made me love her a little. I can be very harsh on her but it is moments like these that make me like her all over again.

Franque Lloydght’s........Ya know, me being a guy who has a great distaste for the arrancar, I find it VERY disconcerting that I like this character so much. I mean he has only popped up a handful of times but he steals the scene everytime. I take it he is more like Grimmjow and doesnt do the whole "rape thing' and actually courted the girl he is with before claiming her? The guy just has such a flamboyant flair to him and i know jack about him lol.

Aizen is just pushing all of Starrks buttons ain't he? It cannot be said enough, but the man is such a douchenozzle. He goes beyond being a dick and just tries to get the gold medal in being an absolute freaking asshat.

chapter 69: Honestly don't have a whole lot to say for this one. It was funny at various points, especially the reveal about the toys lol. Sweet and very tense at other points. A feelgood chapter. Not too sure how I feel about the pairing but I am interested in seeing what happens.

Chapter 70: Another feel good chapter.............UNTIL THE END THAT IS.

-nice interaction between Ajuga and Diaemus.

-I would love to see some one on one interaction between Hiyori and Hana. Hiyori's anger is understandable seeing as not only did Hana protect Lillinete but she is also the pseudo fraction to the woman that killed Lisa(unless it was someone else in this verse). But it is unfair to take it out on Hana who wasn't even born during the war and has only ever known what came after. But they need to get some shit off of there chests or something is going to go down.

-Interesting plan wit the Swarm. Hopefuly they can get the Swarm to play with kid gloves to lower the number of casualties.

-That ending.........yeah.

Chapter 71:Ahem....I believe I left my feelings about this chapter in a different post. Man no one is safe here eh?

Chapter 72:

-funny and cute with Nanao wanting to have some girl time and talk about her night with starrk.

-A class On claiming eh.

Arrancar: "so in short.......you decent looking? You strong?......your ass is marked goods.....Now please do remember to turn in those essay's on "how to not anger your Arrancar master" and "The joys of having your very movement dictated by a claim" first thing Monday morning.....or else-smile-.

Shinigami:............................

(I am such a little shit, I know. I am sure it doesn't go like that)

-Active Shinigami or not, they will be open for the taking. Well I suppose that clears up one of my questions.

-And yep aizen found a way to crank up the douchness. Now he has them getting tagged like cattle.


-“It’s the best sex you will ever have!” her pregnant 8th Seat all but gushed with stars in her eyes.

...best "sex" eh?

*fills a sack fool a bricks and prepares the ritual that will allow him to enter the net*

Meh It is understanable I suppose. If they are going to be claimed and have no choice in it at least they will go in prepared unlike with what happened 15 years ago and have more choice in the matter and can even perhaps snag one of the non abusive Arrancars.

-“I will never understand the younger generation.” Jushiro said ruefully as he watched the breeze shake a few of the pink petals loose, to fall to the ground nearby. “I fear that they’ll see only one side of it and not take into account the rest.”

Jushiro with some major truth there. I take it the ones more open to seeking out claims are the youngsters fresh out of the academy?

-Cute little picnics are always nice

-YES my soi is in the next chap.

waits patiently for the next chapter.........

which is in less than 24 hours. Fuck me sideways I said i would have this up on Saturday didn't I? I need to get my shit in order.

Poor Karin but it was kind of expected and it was hinted at enough as it was but still!!! That sucks I hope Aizen gets what he deserves and suffers as he gets his heart ripped out of his chest!!! I wonder if Karin will get pregnant with his kid.... But it was a great chapter keep up the great work and everything!!!

Chapter 72:
As hard as that had to be for Nanao to tell her division I think it was needed and she did a good job I'm hoping to see more of what happens with the girl that was claimed by Tersa and Tatiski. I'm excited to see the cubs and everything! And I'm also wondering how Toshiro's and Soi-Fon's relationship will change as I'm sure they have never been really close so In wondering if they will grow closer perhaps. Also what's going to happen to Gglo's and Soifon's child is it still going to go to Taski and Tersa or is she going to be able to keep it now that she's with Harribel?

Another great chapter as always keep up the great work!!!

So a few things!! One my reactions to the last chapter were inbetween the two extremes you so kindly wrote out: it had to happen eventually, and she needed that blind pulled away. THIS chapter was amazingly fluffy! And I can't wait for the next sequence of events for all parties to play out (essentially, I can't wait for this fic to finish so I can reread all of it, instead of chapters 1-71 like I did this week).
Also: I went back and reread your other series about the hybrids, and your writing has improved dramatically. Grammar, spelling, prose, the whole lot. =) It is much more detailed and smoother flowing now, with many fewer errors!

Annnnd about HTTYD2: I never saw the first, and I didn't feel very out of the loop, which was good. Not a huge fan, so I didn't suffer the feels everyone else did at certain parts (at least not to the same degree).

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!!!

*narrowly dodges flaming arrow and does a(pointless)barrel roll behind a group of trees*

Kain: "damn they are persistent"

*flips laptop open and begins what may be his last post*

Date, june 24, 2014


Enraged mob of adultfanfic denizens have been trailing me for days now. APPEARENTLY my name got dropped-looks intensely at Nova-before a particular ahem..."event" occurred in a "certain" story. As what may very well be my last act I feel it is necessary to clarify a few things.

Now, I have at several points in both parts of this fic made some very passionate and at times one could say rage filled posts about certain characters and how some have acted in response to some of the terrible things that happen around them. But at no point and please correct me if I am wrong as i tend to forget segments of what i write, did I state that Karin being raped was something I was anticipating.

.Her being more empathetic-yes

.Seeing the world outside of her clique/family/sandbox-definitely

Hell I have said similar things about Tatsuki since she actually had to stand by and watch her best friend get raped for years before things got "better". To me it just felt at times that they were both talking out of there ass's due to there kinship with some of the Arrancar and there mates. But I never would have wished rape upon either of them, a grand epiphany that would have them do something or say something other than "well, there is nothing we can do", sure, I mean they are now planning a coup de ta against a guy that is far above any of them and has proven to be one smart and sadistic motherfucker but thinking of a way to help the abused before it got to that point was beyond them?

Now if I in fact did type such things then I must have been REALLY vexed, but for the life of me I cannot recall doing so.


I am going to wait till tomorrows update before I do a mega review for all of the chapter I have neglected to review. And yes i realize for the past while I have promised a review and not delivered, but that is changing and i intend on getting back into the swing of things.

You asked: "So, how many of you are saying ‘finally, about time she got a taste of what others suffered’ and how many of you are going ‘Noooooooooooo, I hate you! How could you?’"

It's neither, really, or a combo of both, plus some despair and more hatred. I never thought that Karin was unempathetic about the others raped, so the first part of the question seems overly harsh; she just didn't have the direct experience. So I don't agree with the "finally" part. And given that it was nearly inevitable, I won't say "How could you?" either; it fits the story and the characters, and I'm confident that you'll provide some character growth from it. If I'm lucky, you'll even provide some custom-tailored revenge for it.

And since I don't review much, I figured while I'm here I'll also mention that, yep, you're still pulling *more* hatred for Aizen out of me literally *years* after I first started reading this epic. Well done!

I still don't hate him as much as I hate Yammy, though. ;)

Please make them both pay, extravagantly, viciously, and copiously.

71-More like: Well, that was inevitable. Gah. Now I wanna know how Grimmjow is going to react to now knowing the deed has been done and what of their first encounter with each other after? All I gotta say is, Grimmjow better be the one to kill Aizen now as revenge for Karin. He better get some kinda kick-ass second release form that obliterates Aizen, but not before he rams some kind of huge, splintered wooden dildo so far in and out of his ass that it pulls his colon out of his bleeding anus.