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Damn it why am I in a room with other people!?!?!? This makes the squealing part SO MUCH HARDER.

This is EXACTLY why I love reading this story so much, cuz awesomeness and action and more awesomeness and cool scenes and pregnancies! I don't know why that interests me so much, but AS IT WILL!

SO YEAH I'M EXCITED. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

To piggyback off of my last review, seeing as how everyone is back in the SS, I am stoked at the possibility of more Soi scenes and her interactions with other characters. :D :D

My GOD, work has been kicking my ass. Sorry for the lack of review but just been swamped. This is gonna be a short 1 since I have to head out soon.

Well, glad to see that nice and uncle have finally met each other. Awkward as to be expected and it's only natural that Ajuga and Ichigo would not immediately be to fond of the other. There dual awkwardness was cute though. Although their was also this-

“So you’re my uncle huh? You don’t look that strong. No wonder Papa won Mama from you so easily.”

Ouch.

Given the context and the situation that led to her mom being...ahem "won", is that really a matter for people to laugh about? I understand the point of keeping the children hidden from the truth and not giving them all the gritty details of the war or of the world around them but while it protected there 'innocence', it left them very ignorant and did not exactly help there broader outlooks on right and wrong. There parents can only do so much but making them think what they see outside of there bubbles/homes is simply how things are did the kids no favors. Ajuga also seems to have forgotten her epiphany that it was her recklessness that got them into there current situation and she is already thinking about sinking her claws into Aizen.......a man who makes Zee look like nothing. She's got her daddy's habit of talking smack about and TO people who could knock her into the stratosphere lol.

Grimmjow should now be able to emphasize with what Ichigo went through for years. The not knowing what's happening to a loved one. Karma is a bitch and while Grimmjow may be the Ragnar lothbrok of this fic in that he is not AS cruel or barbaric as most of his brethren, he is no saint and he had this coming in a sense.(sorry if that sounds a little harsh)

Will be interesting to see if this little alliances works out but Yuro is going to have her hands full keeping the peace, and I am surprised the Hiyori didn't try to go after grimm or Szyel, unless she wasn't there with the rest of the group. She acted like a bit of a bitch and was cruel but at the same time she was not wrong in what she said and responded like anyone would against someone who killed her comrades in the past or someone she perceives as a traitor. Nice to see Yuzu again and funny how she is able to intimidate people with a spoon, curious to meet this husband of hers. Sweet that she clicked so easily with her niece. she is like Orihime, all full of the warm fuzzies.

Gahhh it is times like these that I wish there had been more chapters on the escapees little adventures lol. Hope you one day do some short stories about what they got up too during the 15 years.

Assuming your keeping Ichigo's growth rate in, at this point shouldn't he be able to smack Grimmjow down without his mask or bankai? I mean I know Grimmjow is no slouch but after there fight in los noches Ichigo had already surpassed him. As I recall and correct me if I am wrong but at a few points in this story a few character even stated that his reiatsu surpassed even starrk's and it's doubtful that he was sitting on his ass for 15 years. He may not have discovered the final getsuga tenshou but if you are sticking to his potential, would it really matter after all this time? I mean the dangai training amounted to like what, 6 months worth of training? He was beating Aizen's ass even before activating the final Getsuga Tenshou tech after that little time.

Odd not seeing an author note at the end with a question of the week. And this ran longer than what I intended so I will end things here lol.

#1 bleach fic on any site. Keep doing what ya do.

-waits patiently for next chapter-

Love your story and kind of sad it is coming to a close soon. I wonder if Aizen will continue the same way he does with Retsu? I mean that is going to be really awkward if he makes Gin prepare her for sex too. And a good way for her to antagonize him a little bit. But I am hoping she gets out of the situation fast enough for that not to happen though. *cross fingers*

Lemme guess, she's pregnant. Congratulations, Renji! You're a poppa! And it's nice to see Yuzu-chan again as well, though I am curious as to who she married. And that meeting with Ajuga went far less bloodily for Grimmjow and Ichigo than I thought it would. Until next week. Laters

Thanks for the update! (ch. 58)

I'm hoping there's some more interaction/exchanges between Ichigo and Ajuga though. While it was understandably short and tense during for a first encounter, it felt a bit flat and left me feeling a little disappointed for some reason.

I figured Nel was pregnant when you recently mentioned her in your A/N....hopefully she delivers while Renji's there. : )

I'm a little confused by Ajuga's reaction at the end. Does she think Szayel is Renji's mate, or is she just reacting to finding out he had kept a secret from her/lied to her?

I loved Ichigo's reaction to finding out about Ajuga, but I wish there had been mooooore. Haha. And I'm probably wrong, but is Nel pregnant? The only reason I could imagine something like that being a special case is because of her base form. I would imagine carrying little centaurs would be hard on a humanoid body.

Last question (for this review), will you go into detail about all of the pregnancies, or just the bare bones of them? Harribel's is very interesting, and I was looking forward to seeing more about it.

Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

What an exciting update, loved it! Thanks for your hard work!

As great as it was, I couldn't help but be just a little sidetracked by wondering where Ajuga and Diamus were during all this. Going by your A/N notes though, at least we know they're there...somewhere. Unconscious, maybe?

Thanks again!

I just want to say that I currently predict Starrk will claim the twins as his Fraccion. I now wait to see if I'm right! And in answer to your question, yeah, I'm waiting and hoping to see those two, but right now I'm really, really, REALLY eager to hear the name of Kenpachi's Zanpakuto! Come on, Kubo-san, spit it out! Until next week, then. Laters!

Hi. Have truly enjoyed the story so far but each chapter is just getting better and better. Every Wednesday morning the first thing I do is check to see if you have posted yet. Yeah, lame, I know.

Funny, you said that you thought this chapter would have been better if it was animated. I guess I'm fortunate, although I would have thought most fanfic readers would be able to the same, as I'm reading, most of the time, I can actually visualize the animated characters. I think you did a wonderful job with your descriptions and characterizations.

I look forward to reading the rest of the story.